Sample:H0512 opt

[Moderator]

11:35, 27th Jun 2008
General Frank:

Too simple model. Animations look very undefined and basic. Skin is horrible. Don't cry that there is no FF model like that here, I don't care, because this model is doesn't reach the THW's standards.
Rejected.

 

[Deolrin]

one word: WTF IS THAT?

well this looks ok if it suppoused to be a something weird from FF... i guess, 3/5?

 

[The Red Wizard]

WTH IS THAT .. wired blob thing.

that was 3 words debode. . 1/5 i dont know WTH it is. its not a Final Fantasy thing

 

[SamPo]

WTH IS THAT .. wired blob thing.

that was 3 words debode. . 1/5 i dont know WTH it is. its not a Final Fantasy thing

It is a FF monster, you have a link for more information so you can see the original monster, and it is quite a boss.

 

[terradont]

I believe it is an alien trying to disguise itself into a FF character to eat all FF-fans brains!

Anyways, bad texture, simple model, the model seems small to begin with, i can see no team color, bad screenshot(cannot see WTH it is?) and i don't know about animations but... 1/5

 

[The Red Wizard]

It is a FF monster, you have a link for more information so you can see the original monster, and it is quite a boss.

but the model dont look like Sample:H0512 opt. its a orange blob

 

[terradont]

No, doesn't look like it at all, the model should be more bug-like in order to achieve that. Also, shading the texture is really required!

 

[SamPo]

I'll try to make it more bug-like, if I can

 

[terradont]

Do that, and try to shade the texture too, onecolored looks ugly as hell

 

[cHeRoL]

lol,it is a robot or a FF one?

 

[SamPo]

Anyone wants to help with the textures?

 

[Mojo Master]

What is this supposed to be?

 

[Mojo Master]

Any way , what ever it is, i have one comment:
You should get a better picture of it because we cant really see what that is it just looks like a little bloby thing...

 

[terradont]

And you should stop Double-posting Mojo-master.

There is something called an edit-button...

 

[varsaigen]

looks like an orange eyeball to me.... it's too monotone and the orange needs shading in the textures.

 

[communist_orc]

Jesus your direct terradont:

looks ugly as hell

...
I will never upload a model again... im scared youll diss me 2! ^^

 

[terradont]

Well, sorry, but i'm talking about textures with no shadows at all, just monotone. And i don't think you upload anything like that?

Anyway, the reason i say it is because it is true, the shading does make half of the texture. A model could be bad or superb with just different textures

Also, i didn't talk directly to SamPo, but in general

 

[Insaniac69]

Bad style. You need to make it bigger or its too small for a real use.

 

[varsaigen]

agreed. This would be awesome if it had shading. that's all.

 

[Deolrin]

Hey, communist, no one will say such things on your model's >_<... they rock, not like this one.

 

[nastyboy_44]

You can't blame MojoMaster.... He's new here. When I first came here I quad posted!

Anyway.. it's like a chemical substance(blob) that's why it's called Sample:H0512 i guess.

I believe you should make better screenshots if you want better critics.

 

[SamPo]

I think you should see it ingame and in the model editor before saying things about it.

 

[nastyboy_44]

And I did... you placed lights but the texture hurts!

The problem is the texture. But for others who see the screenshot first might say "this sucks!"

And from the screenshot this looks like a blob

 

[terradont]

You should still fix screenshots from different angles, since the screenshot makes a big difference in the viewers choise between downloading to test and just looking at the screenshot. After all, you don't want to waste time on useless resources right? That's why screenshots is so important.

 

[nastyboy_44]

That's what I am talking about...

Some people "Judge the book by it's cover and pictures" and not reading the stories first.

 

[terradont]

Y, but you also don't want to read all books that exist right? just the ones that looks interesting by it's cover is picked up and read.

Sorry for continuing on your metaphore

 

[nastyboy_44]

Your right... Who wants to read a book with just plain dirty white cover, right?
And most books like Harry Potter is popular because of it's quality cover.

 

[terradont]

Yup, you catched my drift. The more promising the screenshot, the more interest will it gather.

 

[SamPo]

Done, new screenshot xP

 

[terradont]

Good, looks better and more 3d. But i still think that it may need some additional work to really look like the picture from the lin you gave us.

For example, he needs to be a little lower(thinner) and his eye needs to be bigger, you also forgot the line that goes up from his eye into the orange part.

 

[MGCǂSpectre]

Why don't you use another texture too, instead of this orange? Maybe also add more details to the model.

 

[terradont]

check the link in the description. I believe it should be orange

 

[Deolrin]

Is this got rejected? lol, why? what did the mod typed in there, sampo?