Rebirth of Lordaeron

[deepstrasz]

Sounds too Asian to be fitting for Lordaeron unless the rebirth is made by Pandaren or something.
Regardless, it's short and fades with a newly added instrument/sound (the choir); makes it feel incomplete.

 

[GrapesOfWath]

I do like it, although I feel like maybe the piano part could be better suited for some sort of plucked string instrument or something

 

[Its Ryan Boi]

Not bad at all! I'm not too sure if you're looking for suggestions, but I might throw two suggestions your way! The first suggestion would be to either change the piano with a softer, felt type piano, so it sits better in the mix with the flute that you have (I don't think it's bad the way it is, perhaps try to EQ the low end slightly, and add some reverb to the piano too (but not too much reverb).

My next suggestion would be more of a musical thing, so it's more to do with preference here, so don't worry about this too much! The track seems to just start off with a really in-your-face piano. I personally find this weird, only because the track is pretty relaxing, but then you have the track start at like -8 LUFs, which is like, EDM realm of loudness here (maybe it's louder). So work with the vibe of the track, think about a setting for your music, and think about how it moves from 1 section to another... For example, it starts of calm, but then perhaps the velocity of the piano increases, which makes it sharper, and makes everything more intense, so now everything is more intense, perhaps add drums for added intensity, and then the flute (or have it already added, and maybe make it faster, or change melodically to match the section of the song).

Hope this isn't too much. All in all though, I think what you have here is pretty neat , so keep it up!

 

[Its Ryan Boi]

I think you've done well here. I've noted before that the piano could be changed, or you could EQ it, just so it fits better with the song. It does start off a bit loud (it sort of startles you) for something that sounds like it should be calming. Although the audio is quite short (and sort of just cuts off at the end), I'd say it's quite useful, but it's a little hard for me to consider this a Lordearon themed song (deepstrasz made a good point, in that the guzheng is a little out of place for this theme). All in all it's a good piece! So be happy with what you've created here! I look forward to hearing more from you!

- Approved