ReAl LiFe SlAyErS v1.7

[Moderator]

03:26, 10th Jul 2011
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[prince_of_hatred04]

This is a cool map!!!

A really cool map even without those cool map previews. I already told ya it crashes everytime i try to put one.. Any suggestions why?????

 

[SA Dashie]

how about making your map image .tga and making the image size 256x256 pixels and it will work.
Plz do make a proper description for your map, if you want to know how to check the other maps in the map section.

 

[Orcnet]

Map Review

ReAl LiFe SlAyErS [v1.7]

Rating System

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	5/5	91-100	A

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	4/5	81-90%	B

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	3/5	75-80%	C

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	2/5	70-74%	D

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	1/5	50-69%	F

General:

Gameplay-[5/5]
Note: Commentary for your map's playability.

Terrain-[5/5]
Note: Commentary about your terrain's sight of view.

Managing-[5/5]
Note: Commentary on your game's output.

Overall-[15/15]

Overview

Gameplay

This game only describes "Kill" nothing more, practically based on a hero arena with mixtures of heroes based from comics, animes, movies, etc.

Terrain

Terrain doesn't fit a real arena imagery rather just filled with colorful decorations and such that its only made for fun than a real showcase of epic interior design for a coliseum.

Managing

On the conclusion, this map is supposed to be a game for friends or a personal made map that is played with friends, but to reveal this in the mass world of warcraft 3, its looks dull and straight forward to games called "IMBA". the only thing that awakens me are those "trahtalks and your face" maybe just to fill in some humor and pictures can make players smile in for once, in other words, game is somehow useful.

Total Score

Rating	Number	Percent	Letter
	7/15	73%	D

Status: Conditioned

If you wish to continue your work project, do please send it in the Map Development area so users can help you and you can continue your updates.

 

[ap0calypse]

NiCE TypOGraPhY yOu hAVe tHerE... I suggest you never, ever use it again.

List of negative things:

• You imported files because they looked cool, not because they actually fit your map.
• The terrain is bad. The ice-fire combination is very common for newbs, even though only the best terrainers can make it look good. Yours failed miserably.
• Cinematic doodads...
• Terrain is almost completely flat.
• Missing DISBTN (disbled Button, wherever you see those flashy green icons, there should be a DISBTN. But you don't have those, so it's just green and flashy all the way).
• Hero name: ???, tooltip: ???????????????????
• Nearly no intelligence-heroes, and not a single good intel-hero.
• Random sounds... :/
• "Credits", you say? Where are the credits for those who created the models? And the abilities? And the icons?
• Defeat upon dying?
• What the fuck is wrong with the menu background?
• You can choose those 'secret' heroes if you click fast enough (which isn't hard at all).
• The list is endless

Conclusion: rejected, definitely.

 

[prince_of_hatred04]

NiCE TypOGraPhY yOu hAVe tHerE... I suggest you never, ever use it again.

List of negative things:

• You imported files because they looked cool, not because they actually fit your map.
• The terrain is bad. The ice-fire combination is very common for newbs, even though only the best terrainers can make it look good. Yours failed miserably.
• Cinematic doodads...
• Terrain is almost completely flat.
• Missing DISBTN (disbled Button, wherever you see those flashy green icons, there should be a DISBTN. But you don't have those, so it's just green and flashy all the way).
• Hero name: ???, tooltip: ???????????????????
• Nearly no intelligence-heroes, and not a single good intel-hero.
• Random sounds... :/
• "Credits", you say? Where are the credits for those who created the models? And the abilities? And the icons?
• Defeat upon dying?
• What the fuck is wrong with the menu background?
• You can choose those 'secret' heroes if you click fast enough (which isn't hard at all).
• The list is endless

Conclusion: rejected, definitely.

Maybe it's beacause you played alone... You should have put Ai.... I'm starting my new work with all your comments in mind.. Thanks a lot... You helped me improved my map..

 

[ap0calypse]

Maybe it's beacause you played alone... You should have put Ai

Which part of my comment could be caused because I played alone? The 'bad terrain'? The 'no good intel-hero'?
Well, maybe the "defeat upon dying", I do admit that might be because I was playing alone.

I felt this was a map which you had to play with multiple people (or AI, as you suggested), so that's the reason not much of the game mechanics have been criticized in my post.
Basically, I tried not to say anything about the gameplay because I was playing alone.

 

[prince_of_hatred04]

Ok... so please help me.. What should I do to make this map good enough to be approved??? I already changed the terrain.. Fixed the "defeat upon dying" thing.. I made some new good Intel Heroes... Please tell me what else should I change..

 

[prince_of_hatred04]

Which part of my comment could be caused because I played alone? The 'bad terrain'? The 'no good intel-hero'?
Well, maybe the "defeat upon dying", I do admit that might be because I was playing alone.

I felt this was a map which you had to play with multiple people (or AI, as you suggested), so that's the reason not much of the game mechanics have been criticized in my post.
Basically, I tried not to say anything about the gameplay because I was playing alone.

Ok... so please help me.. What should I do to make this map good enough to be approved??? I already changed the terrain.. Fixed the "defeat upon dying" thing.. I made some new good Intel Heroes... Please tell me what else should I change..

 

[prince_of_hatred04]

Ok... so please help me.. What should I do to make this map good enough to be approved??? I already changed the terrain.. Fixed the "defeat upon dying" thing.. I made some new good Intel Heroes... Please tell me what else should I change..

Oh yeah and one more thing.... that's the reason for the "-clear" command. So you don't get annoyed with the "endless list"