[Cinematic] Queen Elizabeth - Vengeancekael

[Vengeancekael]

Queen Elizabeth Series - By Vengeancekael

Parts:

Teaser [Released]
Part I [Released]
Part II [Released]

Info:

Part II is released

(Yes, i'm back to cinematics)

Cinematics that could inspire me would be nice.

Possible Release Date: Released

 

[Vengeancekael]

Terrain Screenshot:

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[Vengeancekael]

bump...

 

[Hemlock]

Looks alright, perhaps add a little light yellow/orange fog to it.
The thing you really do need to change (which I commented you about @ your Queen of Elizabeth) is your doodad realism, either make your fences smaller or your trees bigger, in this case I'd say make your trees allot bigger cause judging your terrain by the size of the flowers (they match the fences).

Aside from that, don't try to overcrowd your trees, take a look at real forests, and you'll see that they are not stacked after one another, because they need some space to grow their roots at.

In general, i'd say good effort, and keep it up.

 

[Vengeancekael]

Yes the sizes have already been changed
Edit: The Cinematic has been cancelled, aswell as the whole cinematic series, because of 3 reasons:

-The Cinematic series started with 2 bad parts.

-Part 2 doesn't look like the way how i imagined it.

-I actually hate the story

 

[Vengeancekael]

Part II Finished. (AFTER ALL)

 

[-Kobas-]

Well after all I didn't understand nothing (story)
But who cares I wanted to see your skill and I must say it's become better and better

Very nice and much better than flood series

 

[CMarket]

Cinematics that could inspire me would be nice.

Check out my signature and I'd also recommend you view Warnicro's (now Hemlock) work.

 

[Vengeancekael]

lol i watched his cinematics right when they were released xD And including yours