PAW ver.1.DD

[Moderator]

22:00, 27th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
Comment

 

[Slayer14]

Um, what exactly is this map about? You really need to improve your description with some BB Codes.

 

[Narrat0r]

How the hell do you know everyone will love it? -_-

 

[Septimus]

Map that failed to comply with submission rules are bound to be rejected, please post an appropriate description of what is this map all about.

 

[light bolt30]

There is no category and the terrain doesn't seems plain supported by boring gameplay since the description doesn't tell us anything about the map.

 

[-Kobas-]

What is with all that fog, I can't see shit -.-

EDIT:

• Hero Select 1
  • Events
    • Time - Elapsed game time is 50.00 seconds
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
      • If - Conditions
        • (Player 1 (Red) controller) Equal to Computer
      • Then - Actions
        • Set RandomHero = (Random integer number between 1 and 12)
        • If (RandomHero Equal to 1) then do (Unit - Create 1 Beetle for Player 1 (Red) at (Random point in Hero Spawn <gen>) facing (Random real number between 0.00 and 270.00) degrees) else do (If (RandomHero Equal to 2) then do (Unit - Create 1 Boar for Player 1 (Red) at (Random point in Hero Spawn <gen>) facing (Random real number between 0.00 and 270.00) degrees) else do (If (RandomHero Equal to 3) then do (Unit - Create 1 Chicken for Player 1 (
        • Set RandomHero = 0
      • Else - Actions
        • Do nothing

Ok I picked this trigger because it show few really bad staff about map!
Memory leaks
Example -> (Random point in Hero Spawn <gen>)
MPI
Example -> (Player 1 (Red) controller) Equal to Computer
No needed trigger actions
Example -> Do nothing

 

[crawlers]

theres lots of really good examples of really bad maps all over hive

 

[Ironside]

Review by Ironside
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Positive features:

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Negative features:

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Additional Information / Conclusion:

All maps require a proper description in order to be approved.


Rating: /
Vote for: Rejected