ogrelord

[Moderator]

23:17, 19th Feb 2011
DonDustin: you should fix the arms. they deform quite bad during the anims

DonDustin: the arms still deform too much. They might not be connected to the same bone.

 

[takakenji]

the screenshot is kind of shitty and makes his arms look giant, but it looks fine when its actually doing its animations

 

[Maximum_Evil]

Looks good for a first model

 

[Holy Crusader]

Nice Model Idea! But you should edit the Helmet it looks a bit weird.. o.o

 

[-W3SK3R-]

The head and the arms are really weird.

 

[InfernalTater]

The model doesn't look too bad, but not too good either. The file size is kinda large for a model of this quality. If the file size was less than 100 KB, this would be very useful. 3/5 for now. If you manage to improve the quality or cut down the size, I'll raise it to a 4/5, because its animations are worth watching.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

The walk animation is not looping due to having Non-Looping setting checked.
You should fix that.

 

[-Grendel]

oh my, you should really fix his arms. the upper and lower arms separate during its anims.

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

Considerably, some hard work, fixes, upgrades and deleting somethings should make it better...

THINGS ARE OKAY:
1 - his head

THINGS ARE BAD OR DONT LIKED:
1 - His Legs dont combine to his Arms
2 - His Weapon has bad graphics
3 - His Armor looks poor
4 - One of the shoulders havent a Protector
5 - His Teeth make him looks really poor (Actually, Make him Awfull)
6 - His Feets are very small, compared to the hands

FIXES:
1 - Head have to be bigger
2 - Weapon need more work
3 - His Feet must be larger or at last the same of the hands
4 - Delete these teeths
5 - Put Another Shoulder Protector
6 - Change the Armor to another (because his armor is really awfull and poor)

I give 2/5 (good) for that one. With more upgrades i give 4/5 (Awesome) + rep point

Nice Job, Upgrade it and congratulations

 

[takakenji]

Looks good for a first model

it's not my first model?

Considerably, some hard work, fixes, upgrades and deleting somethings should make it better...

THINGS ARE OKAY:
1 - his head

THINGS ARE BAD OR DONT LIKED:
1 - His Legs dont combine to his Arms
2 - His Weapon has bad graphics
3 - His Armor looks poor
4 - One of the shoulders havent a Protector
5 - His Teeth make him looks really poor (Actually, Make him Awfull)
6 - His Feets are very small, compared to the hands

FIXES:
1 - Head have to be bigger
2 - Weapon need more work
3 - His Feet must be larger or at last the same of the hands
4 - Delete these teeths
5 - Put Another Shoulder Protector
6 - Change the Armor to another (because his armor is really awfull and poor)

I give 2/5 (good) for that one. With more upgrades i give 4/5 (Awesome) + rep point

Nice Job, Upgrade it and congratulations

things you didnt like
1. what
2. um k
3. wtf does this mean? i copied it off the original pitlord armor without changing it
4. yeah, that's intentional
5. removed the teeth, but im keeping it on portrait for sake of detail
6. yeah that was kind of the point?

"Fixes"
1. meh, honestly i felt if i made it any bigger it would look goofy
2. yeah, i cant do much unless i find a new texture, but it's not that bad anyway
3. not really, he's meant to have a huge upper body
4. why...
5. um no, the whole point of the design was to only have one. and if i did put another, it horribly deforms with the animations since that shoulder like bends back while holding the weapon
6. wtf does that even mean

oh my, you should really fix his arms. the upper and lower arms separate during its anims.

i didnt see this in model viewer

edit: nvm im working on it now

 

[-Grendel]

dude, his weapon is not a tree, its a war club

 

[Orcnet]

dude! the arms doesn't match with the shoulders, it looks like dismembered or something, good idea with the jaw armor, but try to change the ogres head with his counterpart so it will look more brutish instead of the one-eyed head

I Wanna Mean that the model's proportions are very odd, even if the model is a ogre, his legs are nearly the same of the arm, his head looks like a egg with a small ball in the middle, his weapon is triangular (even knowing that is a tree) this is odd, (seriously) His Armor in his belly looks like a giant carpet, and at last, WTF is these "Infernal Contraption's" Teeths doing in a ogre?
summarizing, this is a monstrosity, or you are a poor model maker, or you really have bad taste for things...

you don't have to be a bad critique just for the mishaps of his model, the lad is doing great, wait for him to do some better fixing, all of his models are great by the way, and dude its not "Teeths"(that means breast) its a jaw armor made with infernal contraption's texture

 

[takakenji]

I Wanna Mean that the model's proportions are very odd, even if the model is a ogre, his legs are nearly the same of the arm, his head looks like a egg with a small ball in the middle, his weapon is triangular (even knowing that is a tree) this is odd, (seriously) His Armor in his belly looks like a giant carpet, and at last, WTF is these "Infernal Contraption's" Teeths doing in a ogre?
summarizing, this is a monstrosity, or you are a poor model maker, or you really have bad taste for things...

um did you even download the model at all, the weapon model is an edited ogre warclub to be longer, i deleted the old tree

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

Calm i havent be bad... i just say what i wanted to mean, i just thinked that he doest understanded what i wanted to mean before, so i summarized the comment... i just wanted to mean that the model have lot of things that can be upgrated to another version in something really awesome...


Sorry if my comment was rude to you sorry man, i just wanted to say that your model if fixed these things i say before it would be really awesome...

 

[Orcnet]

its not rude, its WORSE! LOL!
just kidding, nah! your post is not that bad, just go tell him the better ways of fixing it instead of making the model look really bad and you will be fine

 

[Great Chief Aeon]

Oks Forget this...
We are here to say some bugs and problems in the model, not say what i say... LOl
anyway, keep these fixes and this model shall be really nice...