Nithalak's Lost Spell Scrolls

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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Aug/26 18:38:02

Comment: [Rejected]
The storyline is too random and incomplete. The intro is completely confusing and tells the player nothing.
Also don't use active icons for passive skills.
Your map is also too simple, it has no features, you've just used items as spells and the objective is to just go around and kill creatures and find scrolls.
The environment is just random, one area is just beautiful nature, 5 meters away undead tiles.
This is your first map, so go check out some approved maps to get inspired, etc.

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[Kala]

Here's a quick review:

First of, the game was way too short and monotonic. There is no puzzles or any secrets you could search. All you had to do was run forward and kill everything that moves. The dialogs were also poorly made, and it seemed like the game wasn't even following the story. Just mindless running.

The terrain gave me the feeling that you didnt use more than 5 minutes to make it. It didn't really look like a temple, and it was way too narrow.

Also, a map like this should have replayability. But this one doesnt. You cant do anything differently that you did last time. There's only 6 items, limited creeps and no hidden bosses etc.

Rating: 2/5

 

[Ashitaka]

i will fix this defects thanks for investigation.now im trying make some puzzle and secret area.i will rewrite story in map and change gameplay.

 

[Ashitaka]

Here's a quick review:

First of, the game was way too short and monotonic. There is no puzzles or any secrets you could search. All you had to do was run forward and kill everything that moves. The dialogs were also poorly made, and it seemed like the game wasn't even following the story. Just mindless running.

The terrain gave me the feeling that you didnt use more than 5 minutes to make it. It didn't really look like a temple, and it was way too narrow.

Also, a map like this should have replayability. But this one doesnt. You cant do anything differently that you did last time. There's only 6 items, limited creeps and no hidden bosses etc.

Rating: 2/5

Map Updated.Ready for next invastigation.

 

[KingLichTR]

still no investigation
such professional team
many low reviews
wow