Night Elf Gods

[Dark Master]

What about it? It`s my first...

 

[Gilles]

No tile variation. : (

 

[Dark Master]

No tile variation. : (

So what?

 

[~Void~]

So that looks bad. And get rid of all the trees you used except for the green pines, and then make more of those. Tree variation is good, but not when it looks retarded.

 

[Dark Master]

Of course I know that it is bad! I`m not terrainer! This is just for fun!

 

[Nbah]

Don't get offended. This is just simple criticism with the purpose of you getting better.

 

[Celaquil]

Yeah Dark, take the critique, swallow it, and try to do something about what Void said to you. I do want to point out, though, that I like very much the way that Ancient actually looks like a god, I dont know but once I opened the picture I just fell in love with how you did him.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Actually Void and Gilles have been terrain moderators for some time, so they know what they say.

That aside, the sky is to open, no tile variation, and all trees got almost same size.

You gotta vary stuff.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

All the things other guys said and the water that the huntress is standing on is a square that just ends suddenly

 

[Dark Master]

Good, good. What about this one. I made it for fifteen minutes...

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Whats with the dense fog?

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Good, good. What about this one. I made it for fifteen minutes...

It's pretty nice. Though the fog is teal and wierd, and the buildings shouldnt be that big and the foreground is very empty.

 

[leet.firefox]

Hmmm, first one is at the end of the world. Only 1 grass tile. Square pool of water. Some odd trees, and just a few rocks and bushes. And why is there water shooting from the "God's" groin?

Second Pic: Empty and illogical. Why is there an archway before a wall with guys in front of it.It looks nice, but it seems if you moved the camera even to the slightest you would see emptyness. It gives no illusion of depth or substance.

 

[Dark Master]

Thanks for the critiques. +rep to all

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Ugh.

Hurry and delete that doublepost :3

Its against the rules.

 

[Dark Master]

Fixed first image!