Nevermore Wars Alpha 0.00a

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Vengeancekael: Private Message
Date: 2012/Feb/03 22:03:35

Reasons:
Missing custom preview image: To add a preview image, resize the image to 256x256 or 128x128 using gimp and save it as .tga. Import the image and change its path to 'war3mapPreview.tga'.
Work in progress maps are not allowed in the maps section. Only BETA (Playable) and full versions.

Other:
Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials
Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section
Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone
Comment: The map concept is too simple and in too early stage. Post it in map development and add more features to it before uploading it here again.

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[Foronisus]

ok going to review it im downloading it now

To tell i didnt played with players so i can tell what i can with singleplayer:

Terrain - hmm you still need improvement in the terrain you should add more brushes at right place you put all brushes in one place its not very good. so ill give 3/5 here

Suggestion: You should make Ai playable,add the brushes into the right place not all on one place.Also put more items in the game.

Improve the description and change the pictures because im not seeing them.

So ill give 3/5 for now and if you make new version ill check and review it again

 

[TheNightWalker]

Ok thanks for the Information, this helped me . I need some help. I don't know if people like this, or don't like the items,game bugged or terrain is bad.

Well I'm already working on 0.03. I changed many things . I hope you will like it !

 

[Vengeancekael]

A preview image would be nice <3
Also the images are gone, I suggest not to use a temporary image storage website. How about uploading them in an album on the hiveworkshop?
Also shorten the huge amount of text in the description.
And don't forget to mention in the description that the map is protected!
Also shorten the map's file name, or it won't show up in the maps list!

Short review:

Well first thing, the mode 'Team' is missing even though the host is asked to choose between FFA and team.
You've made custom items with really neat and short tooltips, also recipe items!
Custom icons have also been used!
The map's idea is way too simple, you basically play the Shadowraze hero and basically have to kill the other players using his skills and the random runes around the map.
That idea has been done a hundred times before.
The terrain is also a bit chaotic, the bushes don't really fit the thick and green grass tile, you've only used blizzard cliffs, not heights, no custom models whatsoever and no fog.
You need to implement a more interesting and maybe complex feature into the map for it get to fun and special.


Other:
*A loading screen would be nice
*Colorize the map's title in the editor (Map Description) [Tool]
*Improve the map description (Not on the hiveworkshop, but ingame, the loading screen text and the lobby description -> Tell us about the map, not the latest changes
*There's a typo in the item 'Precision Razes' title
*Remove the 'Kill X' leaderboard -> A game message in the beginning will do
*Remove missing players from the scoreboard

Rating: 1/5

(even though I'm not a mod, I just felt like using that image)

 

[-Kobas-]

Did this map made any progress?

 

[sonofjay]

Rejected but still pending
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[TheNightWalker]

Hey guys,

sorry for this big delay. Well Im working on it. Don't worry but im also working on 1 other project with my friend. We are working on a ORPG ! The next time we will post it on Hiveworkshop and we will give you some information about the ORPG. But im still on it. I worked already on the map and the beta can come soon...ish xd !