Need some advice with my video

[Idaero Ace]

Right now I'm in mood to make some videos so I need some review about my old videos.

1

2

3

Please review it, some advise will good for me.
Thanks

 

[Radicool]

What sort of advice are you looking for?

Also, are you developing a game and making a trailer for it? Are you advertising/presenting a certain game? Trying to deliver some sort of message, morale or story? Or are you just making a random video?

It's important there's some purpose behind making a video.

 

[Idaero Ace]

Well, it was used for a contest, from Lost Saga (an online game from Korea, and its popular in my country), and win in around 15th place. The judges didnt give any review so I dont know what I should fix.

The first video is the main video. Its a story of a character in there, about a guy who never want to lose.

The second video is nothing. Well I tried to make a trailer of it but I think its failed.

And the third video, I tried to remake the battle. When I make the first video, I was sick, And the deadline is only 3 days left.