Need help and constructive criticism

[noob134]

hi i am making a logo thing for fun (not by request) for a project a saw here on the hive.

please give constructive criticism to help me improve, its a WIP.

note: i just got a tablet and this is my first piece on it.

 

[XenoStalker]

Great horn texture: the right horn (from our point of view) looks a bit... tightly corked, if you know what I mean, where the left one's cork effect is smooth and transitions pretty nice. I'd touch that up a bit just for aesthetic appeals. Also, precise cracks and rough surface tricks on the skull itself will bring more of the texture out.

 

[noob134]

Great horn texture: the right horn (from our point of view) looks a bit... tightly corked, if you know what I mean, where the left one's cork effect is smooth and transitions pretty nice. I'd touch that up a bit just for aesthetic appeals. Also, precise cracks and rough surface tricks on the skull itself will bring more of the texture out.

i tried to fix the horn, but it still doesnt really look good xD
i brought the outline of the skull to the surface and i tried to at some of the cracks and stuff to.

 

[XenoStalker]

i tried to fix the horn, but it still doesnt really look good xD
i brought the outline of the skull to the surface and i tried to at some of the cracks and stuff to.

What you have added alone makes it so much more appealing. If you wanna progress further simply try shading some areas or what not (unless you are done with it as it is).