My terrain: The begining

[VeljkoM]

I am not good terrain maker and probably I shouldn't even post my terrains but I need constructive feedback to improve my self.

The Chess Game

I'll probably add more as the time goes.

 

[White-Lion]

In the future, try to do terrains without units and add some kind of doodads instead, it'll make it more interessting
Add fog for atmosphere

 

[Azurot]

I actually find it quite charming! But work on the crack in the wall, and find a more fitting model instead of the fire elementals on the Old Gods side. This has a certain air of simple symbolism that i love, but you could add more counteracting details, such as standards on the left side, and crystal something or a nothers' on the left. And really just mix it up a bit, and you could even work with some lighting techniques of counteracting glow doodads and lights. One of my more demanding problems is the use of the the blizzard tiles, that are around the wonderful chessboard. They seem undecorated and out of place somehow. Anyways very nice, and i hope to see more of this sort of thing from you!

 

[Dr. House]

hmm well let me think its somhow very very very simple to make but it also looks nice so it isnt even bad in other words i like it

 

[Piwlady]

I actually love the idea really much! The execution would be bit better, try to add some cool lighting stuff there and some details on walls. I have the feeling that this could be damn good. I don't often +rep for terrains but this idea is totally worth of it :3

 

[VeljkoM]

Nice to see that people like the idea. And what to add to the walls? Honestly all that space just looks empty which kinda ruins the picture. I tried to add hanging cages but it didn't look good.

 

[Megafyr]

Reminds me of Harry Potter, lol! It is orignal, but you have to work with fog/lightning and doodad placements. Keep practising!

 

[Piwlady]

Nice to see that people like the idea. And what to add to the walls? Honestly all that space just looks empty which kinda ruins the picture. I tried to add hanging cages but it didn't look good.

I'd change the gate to something better, dunno what. And Then I'd add windows so you could see outside ( maybe lake at night or something :3 moon, water, some trees, you know )

 

[Celaquil]

Love the forgotten one, how he is closing his eye a little, seems like he's thinking "What should I do?"

But thats about it. Yes, try to not use units in your terrain, rather construct things out of doodads. blablabla, what everyone else said.

 

[Dr. House]

lol keiji you siriously telling him that he basicly should have made all those things out of doodads?

 

[Azurot]

lol keiji you siriously telling him that he basicly should have made all those things out of doodads?

It would have been mother fuc-..ing legendary had he made little stone constructs for each of the pieces and then added fire and ice as need for detail.

 

[VeljkoM]

Wouldn't that kind of figures kinda kill the idea here?

 

[hapykiller999999]

I kinda like the place for it. It is like some big king approaching the hell fortress.

 

[siegaeditor]

It's quite interesting but add more doodadds and theres a crack on the wall

 

[chr2]

Maybe you should use the tentacles, instead of fire elementals, as towers?

 

[VeljkoM]

Uh tentacles are kinda here Old Gods hands.

 

[fladdermasken]

Add windows of some sort on the walls, and instead of the standard torches you could use the castle ones in utm. Might ease up on the fire a bit as well so it doesn't look so messy. The idea is great though, and I love the use of models.

 

[Razosh]

I freaking love it´s some of the best terrain I´ve ever seen simple and still freaking amazing 5/5 and +rep

 

[Razosh]

Is this betwen Yogg-Saron and Kil´jeaden cose I would not really be suprised if that were one of the old gods

 

[VeljkoM]

Yes the right side represent Old Gods but didn't think about which one.