My homework

[Hantoo]

I will be showing my homework and project progress here meanwhile getting critics and advices from you guys to improve myself this is what im doing

Im not sure what this call but is something like give u some material and draw/design something with those material and draw it out
The material can be bend, resize or whatever changes...

Im basicly done the main thing, but im bad at shading... So... Hope you guys can give me some advice

screenie

 

[Cherrymage]

Creative and beautiful!
Though the mechanical pencil and eraser look blended into the drawing itself.

 

[Hantoo]

Creative and beautiful!
Though the mechanical pencil and eraser look blended into the drawing itself.

Ahh thx

 

[Tickles]

If you didn't mind redoing it, you could get really creative and shape them into a larger image. Maybe a running animal? The slenderness of the objects would make for a good running cheetah form and make your teacher's jaw drop.

The shading is good on the top-most objects, but I got confused where the light source(es) came from as I looked at the lower objects that have shading in different directions. I think it would be better if you just envisioned one strong light source up in a corner and base all of your shading off that.

 

[Arad MNK]

This looks Good on most parts, but the Shading gets Awkward on the Bottom...

 

[Hantoo]

If you didn't mind redoing it, you could get really creative and shape them into a larger image. Maybe a running animal? The slenderness of the objects would make for a good running cheetah form and make your teacher's jaw drop.

The shading is good on the top-most objects, but I got confused where the light source(es) came from as I looked at the lower objects that have shading in different directions. I think it would be better if you just envisioned one strong light source up in a corner and base all of your shading off that.

This is kinda a last minute work so i cant afford to redo it... but maybe i will redo for my own xd
For the light source... Im not really sure xd ... Anyway.... I will try whatnu say for the shading part in future xd