My first Post:D

[NvK]

Hey guys this is my first terrain so pls be gentle
It shows the white's knight haven

 

[Gilles]

Well... I suggest looking at other peoples work. This really isn't any good at all.

Oh and please read this... Read first: why it's not a good idea to post your first model - Wc3campaigns
he whole "this is my first terrain" gets old.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

The whole "this is my first terrain" gets old.

Agreed...
Nothing good to say about this terrain really :/

 

[NvK]

well i realise that its not rly good but instead of saying nothing good about this u could tell me whats wrong with it so i can fix it. Anyway any opinion is appreciated

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Well... We can see the end of the world, sky has some strange dimensional rip, the trees you used are fugly, nothing really blends with eachothers, waterfalls starts from the oblivion... I could keep going, but I guess you get the idea

 

[Gilles]

I'm going to be brutally honest here, it looks like someone took a shit on the World Editor. It's just random stuff thrown together.

The plants and trees don't even match, you used fall trees with summer looking plants and nice green grass. You used the worst tileset known to mankind, and didn't use any tile variation.

Blizzard cliffs are ugly to start with, and you managed to take that to a whole new level. They look awful. I think you thought the statue and footman were cool looking so dropped them in there too.

I have no idea what that huge black spire is, but it's ugly. You made this at the edge of the map and therefore anything behind your waterfall is going to be black. Your terrain ends after the waterfall. You always should give the illusion that the terrain goes on. Use fog and mountains to do this. You don't seem to know where the smooth tool is, or don't know how to use it. Everything has really sharp edges and looks so unnatural. You just spammed doodads all around the waterfall, but managed to miss the whole front area!

I guess one good thing is you weren't afraid to use doodads. And the waterall itself isn't too bad.

Well you said any opinion. This is probably the worst critique I've ever dished out. Not sure why I took it out on you, because this isn't the worst I've seen.

 

[NvK]

lol anyway thx for the critique ill try to get better

 

[~Void~]

It's not THAT bad... for a first, but you might want to fix some of the obvious fuckups like the sky, and the end of the map. The whole thing looks incomplete.

 

[Just_Spectating]

Ctrl + Scroll Please

 

[Gilles]

It's not THAT bad... for a first, but you might want to fix some of the obvious fuckups like the sky, and the end of the map. The whole thing looks incomplete.

I don't give any leniency to "this is my first terrain, go easy plox".

PS. You passed me in gems you bastard!

 

[Traxamillion]

and God said "let there be light" insted there was this shit.

 

[NvK]

Traxamillion perhaps u can make smthin better than this shit...if u can i would like to see it

 

[Traxamillion]

sorry to be so harsh...but seriosly

 

[NvK]

yuh seriously...u werent harsh u were saying ur opinion...but can u make smthin better? just out of couriosity

 

[Traxamillion]

im not exactly a terrainer..but ya i could.

 

[Just_Spectating]

alot of people could make something better. no offense.