Mortubi

[Moderator]

Orcnet

23:00, 10th Nov 2013

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Mortubi (Tested Last Updated Nov 10, 2013) Rate Score Percent Letter 5/5 91-100 A Rate Score Percent Letter 4/5 81-90% B Rate Score Percent Letter 3/5 75-80% C Rate Score Percent Letter 2/5 70-74% D Rate Score Percent Letter 1/5 50-69% F Overview: Gameplay "The idea of near goblin merchant is a good source of life support through out the process of the game, I never had problems creeping out the neutral camps along side the expansion guards." Terrain "The Terrain looks fair looking, there's no problem going on though, except you could use those green spires as a some sort of wall blockage and tree collision to prevent lumbering workers automatically reaching elsewhere." Management "Overall map can be useful." Total Score: (Gameplay[x/5] + Terrain[x/5] + Management[x/5] / Total Score[15] * 50 + 50) Rate Score Percent Letter 9/15 80% C

 

[Twilight]

Comment

An other melee map, looks cool, awesome, nice work, just one more thing, before
you upload make screenshots upload them to the hive, then upload the map
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Rating
4/5

Terrain

Epic terrain, shores are smoth, Islands look awesome. Epic work.
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Rating
5/5

Gameplay

A regular melee map.
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Rating
4/5

Final Rating

Terrain:5/5
Gameplay:4/5
Comment:4/5

FINAL RATING
5/5

Suggestions
-Just one, add some screenshots (very important to description)

GIFT

1/5=no rep
2/5=no rep
3/5=no rep
4/5=no rep
5/5=1 rep

Rating 5/5=+1rep

Vote for Approval

 

[Legal_Ease]

Please see http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorial-submission-283/how-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/#post2416435

Oh, wait. I know you. You don't need the tutorial at all. Please add a screeny, at least a full map view or something.

 

[normalice]

screenshots added

 

[Legal_Ease]

screenshots added

Ok. Those look nice but they should be in the description. Read the tutorial I posted above and add them in a

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box. The tutorial describes how to do this. Its easy and it will improve the description 100%.

 

[Twilight]

Ok. Those look nice but they should be in the description. Read the tutorial I posted above and add them in a

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box. The tutorial describes how to do this. Its easy and it will improve the description 100%.

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He is right, put the screens in description that will make the map more interesting. ;D

 

[BLazeKraze]

Comments and Suggestions

Wow this map is map is very awesome, The terrain symmetry is cool, The alignment of starting base are cool enough . Anyway in the terrain design, I'm not contented .
- First I saw in some place that you spammed shrubs and flowers, These things are not good enough, Its looks dirty . As I said in my reviews on other maps, I always looking on the terrain.
- Next the whole map looks an Island make of sand only . I know that you put some tile in other part , But you need to add more tile design to make it beautiful , You should put some grass or rough dirt and some dirt . You need to mix them very well . Always remember that the map with good terrain is more enjoyable .

Anyway your map rating is .

4/5 + 1 rep

 

[-Kobas-]

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: -Kobas- Map Name: Mortubi Map Author: normalice Map Uploader: normalice Originality Simple melee map, nothing special about it. Score: 50/100 Presentation It's good enough. Good job. Score: 75/100 Terrain Terrain is symmetric, and that's cool. Tiles are messy, and sometimes make no sense. Too many random placed doodads (corals, waterfalls etc). There is empty space between trees. You should use cliffs or deep water to make different terrain levels and protect base and/or expansions. Natural Archway should be placed on sand/dirt tile not on bricks. Shrubs are overused on expansion locations. Score: 10/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Gameplay Please use random item drops, not custom defined tables. Because of terrain errors base and/or expansion is open from almost all sides. There is no artifact item drop. Some creep camps are super strong. Some creeps don't fit together (Sea Elemental + Warlock). Score: 40/100 Site Rules Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback. Got any World Editor related questions? Make a thread in the World Editor Help Zone Section. Tutorials Final Score: 42.500/100 1/5 Vote for Rejection Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[normalice]

i've looked several times and I just don't see any malfunctioning terrain. Could you give me some hint?

 

[Statharas]

I am unable to check the map myself, but does the terrain make sense? aka no random tiles everywhere? Are there light green patches in regular paths and dark green patches in paths units don't take often? Do terrain objects make sense? Are they spammed or placed carefully? Are there any problems regarding entrances to bases (such as vulnerabilities due to lack of flora)?

Try answering the above and see if you can solve possible problems.

 

[normalice]

I am unable to check the map myself, but does the terrain make sense? aka no random tiles everywhere? Are there light green patches in regular paths and dark green patches in paths units don't take often? Do terrain objects make sense? Are they spammed or placed carefully? Are there any problems regarding entrances to bases (such as vulnerabilities due to lack of flora)?

Try answering the above and see if you can solve possible problems.

it's basically the same terrain as my "Hegemony" map, but without the cityscape center.

 

[Orcnet]

Map approved, see moderator comment on top.