MagnificentGryphonRider.blp

[Moderator]

14:13, 12th Jul 2015
Kwaliti:

Ouch. While the idea is good, the execution is extremely flimsy. Everything looks very papery and bland. You'll need to start over and work on properly painting each part.

 

[Misha]

well kudos for actually doing freehand.. it just lacks any sort of shadow or highlight, for starters..

 

[Leo Akastenix]

Im not trying to critize ur work... but um...



The grffin and the dwarf looks too cute!

 

[Eagle XI]

wings look paper,
bodily feathers look as if dipped in paint, unnatural,
as others said you need to work on shadows and highlighting.

On the other hand it can be the low-resolution, crappy geometry model's fault mixed in there,
may i be so bold to suggest you work with an better griffon model ?
ive attached one to this post.
path for its tex is simply textures\

 

[fireblasts]

wings look paper,
bodily feathers look as if dipped in paint, unnatural,
as others said you need to work on shadows and highlighting.

On the other hand it can be the low-resolution, crappy geometry model's fault mixed in there,
may i be so bold to suggest you work with an better griffon model ?
ive attached one to this post.
path for its tex is simply textures\

agree with what you said it needs alot of work...

 

[InfernalTater]

You'll need to work on the texture a lot, but I like where this is going, and you're doing well for being new. I have to give you props on using freehand, you're putting more work into this than most people when they start out. I have a feeling there's going to be good things coming from you in the future.

2/5 for now, sadly, because it looks so much like painted confetti that I'd give some grats on its resemblance if it was intentional.

 

[Kingluis]

Thx for your tips mates, since even tho they are pretty negative it makes me see what I did wrong and Improve

update soon

 

[Splub]

I do like it, it is quite magnificent! Keep up the great work, God Bless!

 

[camren]

aw those Wings