Lynel Variations (Currently only One)

[Mister_Haudrauf]

~reserved

Okay. A short History about the Lynels.

The Lynels, while differing in Color, are very Rare to find outside of the Darknut Legion.
The Darknut Legion is a faction consisting majorly of Clifflord Warriors or simply Darknut Warriors. Therefore Darknut Legion. The 'God' of the Darknut Legion has defeated the Lynel's strongest warrior and from that Day forth the Lynels served the Legion as Elite-Class Warriors or as bodyguards for the Legions most important Cities.

[+] I will most likely Update their History once i completed the Darknut Legion's Buildings.
I have already one uploaded.

Things to fix:

- Lower Body is far too wide
- It shouldn't have modelled hands
- Fur texture is too Monotone. (Red Lynel and Blue Lynel)
- In one of the attacks, the back legs bend the entire wrong way.
- The Model lacks weight behind It's movements.

Here are the Old Versions: Lynel Variations (Old).rar

Feel free to give constructive criticism and suggestions.

 

[Direfury]

The animations need serious work. In one of the attacks, the back legs bend the entire wrong way.

Try to reference Centaur and Pit Lord animations, look at the weight behind their movements. The texture on the body is also in need of serious work, as it comes off like one single colour, and nothing more. It really shouldn't have modelled hands, considering the level of detail on the rest of the mesh. The lower body is also far too wide. It's unnatural.

You may want to work on those issues before moving forward.

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

I seriously consider quitting with how much wrong and false everything seems to be.

 

[Stefan.K]

I seriously consider quitting with how much wrong and false everything seems to be.

Don't quit, just follow the suggestions people give you. I see you are modeling in milkshape. I also was very bad at making meshes in milkshape but practice makes everything perfect.
Just be sure to practice and make more and more models and you'll see progress.
The same is with the animations, you know how the process works, so you just need to practice.

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

@Stefan.K Do you have any suggestions or constructive criticism to give?

I make a list on the first comment on what has to be fixed.

Aside from that i can give a small picture: the Upper is the old one and the bottom one is the newer one.

Spoiler

[-] He still has modelled hands.

[+] He attacks now sideways. Think of the Footmans 'Attack - 2' or the Pitlords attacks.

[+] I also fixed the leg problem. It bends now right. (I think)
Upper = Old / Bottom = New

Spoiler

 

[Stefan.K]

@Stefan.K Do you have any suggestions or constructive criticism to give?

I make a list on the first comment on what has to be fixed.

Aside from that i can give a small picture: the Upper is the old one and the bottom one is the newer one.

Spoiler

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[-] He still has modelled hands.

[+] He attacks now sideways. Think of the Footmans 'Attack - 2' or the Pitlords attacks.

[+] I also fixed the leg problem. It bends now right. (I think)
Upper = Old / Bottom = New

Spoiler

View attachment 273233
View attachment 273232

If I was you I would first adjust the mesh parts, like arms, they shouldn't look just like circle made mesh, think about it. Overall I think whole mesh looks wrong. Just take a look at in game centaur models, you'll notice the differences about the legs. Just compare the centaur model with your and you will see what you need to fix.

 

[Cuore]

this modeling project from @Mister_Haudrauf is nice in my opinion. It has some things that can be optimized, sure, but it's a nice little work already.

Irrelevant suggestion, removed

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

that the knee of the concept art pic's forelimb is definitely bent backwards.

The Leg in Model Picture is bent forward, because it's actually a Picture of the Attack animation.

Well one of them. They are now two. At least in the Version that i have on Pc.

 

[Cuore]

true, irrelevant suggestion.

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

Wow taking the Hands away pushed the polycount to 3528.

Spoiler: Hands

The Wrap is still bad. At least on the Upper body.

Spoiler: Upper Body

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

Okay. I edited his Torso and Arms.
He has now abs.

Spoiler

I probably edit it until it has little to no seams.

 

[Direfury]

Now you're getting it. The mesh is looking much nicer.

 

[BossGengar]

I hate these guys in BotW, very nice model!

 

[General Frank]

A nice model and rather good animations.
Works in-game and performs well.

 

[stein123]

Any chance to update this bundle? the animatios are kinda robotic :s

 

[Mister_Haudrauf]

Any chance to update this bundle? the animatios are kinda robotic :s

I have plans involving him. However that will take some time.