Lost Ruins

[WindowsVistaSucks]

All welcome to give constructive criticism, meaning that you can suggest some ideas or something I may need to fix or add.

For all those that do enjoy this pice of terrain I have made I am glad you have liked it. And if enough people like this I will make the underground terrain, for the inside of the Lost Ruins.

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6.5/10

So I decided to make the inside of the Lost Ruins, because due to me being new to the Hive Workshop; I just wanted to show some of my skills with world editor.

Again please give constructive criticism for my work, I always like feed back on what I can add and fix. That is a good way for me to start becoming good at making terrain.

For all those that do enjoy my work so far please tell me what you liked.

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[WindowsVistaSucks]

Please add comments on how I could improve please. Thanks to all who enjoyed.

 

[MortAr]

The flatness of the outside place is killing it totally.
I don't know if it's intentionally, but it doesn't look good.

Custom light and fog should be included, after all, they are old and "lost", it should have some kind of an atmosphere.

Don't know if the palms INSIDE fit very well, I mean, it's underground, trees should look more "dead", in my opinion or at least not that greenish.

Other.. hmm.. I see there are missing marks or anything similar to add again more effect to the ruin itself, you should work on it.

Also, for the outside view, the shore should be made of dust or sand tileset, this whole grass spam doesn't look that stylish.

 

[Ikithe]

The Underground Area doesn't feel very "Underground"-ish, more like a big ruined temple with the top chopped off, but that doesnt mean its not good.

Actually, I think your underground tunnels are very, very good. You need to do more of this stuff.

 

[Amargaard]

The Underground ones are awesome, but yes as Ikithe said, they doesn't look very undergroundish. Because I'm glad today, I'll rep you for this beautiful piece of work

 

[Bernkastel]

The inside place should probably have: sand, dirt, water and small rocks that have fell from the surface, as the temple is probably old i presume it cant hold much of those materials. And as for the outside i think that there should be atleast some vines and other plants growing on the temple entrance, if they dont have professional maintenance person who keeps everything fixed up

 

[Solaris]

Hmm as it has been said before the outside pics need more height variation, also put something in the background right now it looks flat and empty. Another tileset could work fine as well, the current one is a bit too bright green (maybe its a personal impression).
The Underground stuff doesnt feel much like underground, a reason could be the Palms growing underground.
Also the redish walls are some kind of irritating (again could be an individual thing).
Maybe you should make the complete atmosphere darker and add some tiny light rays on specific locations, indicating decent light falling down from the surface.
And I miss the atmosphere of the Lost Ruins at all, it could be more lost and more ruined .

But good so far, like to see more!!!

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

Whoaaa forgot all about this LOL. This terrain sucks to me now. But oh well thank you all for your comments.

 

[~Void~]

It has potential, especially the underground part, but the colors and textures of pretty much everything on there clash.