Lord of Courage(improved)

[Italic]

Last face was better, these shield reveal an obviously CnP. Last was really really better .

 

[_Guhun_]

I'll have to disagree with Italic, his face actually matches his portrait in-game now, even if it is a little big. I guess a better face could be chosen, but it has to match the portrait, and it simply didn't before.

The way you changed the books into straps was cool, I like it!

Also, it has no tail now!

Rating increased from 3/5 to 4/5. Good job!

EDIT: After testing his face in-game, I like it a lot more, including its proportions.

 

[Italic]

I'll have to disagree with Italic, his face actually matches his portrait in-game now, even if it is a little big. I guess a better face could be chosen, but it has to match the portrait, and it simply didn't before.

The way you changed the books into straps was cool, I like it!

Also, it has no tail now!

Rating increased from 3/5 to 4/5. Good job!

EDIT: After testing his face in-game, I like it a lot more, including its proportions.

Mmm, i dont have tested it yet, what you think about these shields?.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Neat. Though I feel the clipping on those crazy hand-scythes is a little much.

 

[Diegoit]

Neat. Though I feel the clipping on those crazy hand-scythes is a little much.

Yup

 

[General Frank]

Please fix the proportions of model, especially the head.
You might also want to fix the dissipate animation: Some particle effects are still visible and they should not.

 

[General Frank]

Interesting idea and solid execution.
Looks good and performs adequate in-game.