Kingdom of Riverdown

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16:27, 5th Nov 2013
Orcnet: Reviewed

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Hell_Master Map Name: Kingdom of Riverdown Map Author: Leorik Originality Quite a decent theme for the terrain template you made, a peaceful town also being inhabited by unknown demons and cretures at places though I do think it could use some more interesting ideas. Still, good job so far! Score: 61/100 Presentation Decent presentation for the descriptions here at hive and a very informative description at in-game! Though what quite strikes is that you used template for the descriptions, I know it is fine but it is always good to discover ways on BB Codes and make something different than overused templates (not meanting to offend creators just saying that being original at some points does make it worth it!). Also, please do take your time putting some screenshots for this map mostly it is a Template, it requires one for users to see your map and it is also in our rules to be informative in your map as possible. Score: 55/100 Terrain Terrain is good, well-detailed though grasses are much spammed and could be lessen at some points and good tile variation makes it better. Though the terrain is much flat, also trees could use more scaling sizes for we all know in real life, trees are big in sizes and lastly, instead of using cliffs, you could put some doodads acting as walls like rock to better make it realistic and not blizzard-ish though this suggestions are recommended if you aim for much more realistic quality in your map. Score: 65/100 Object Data Nothing much of a problem, good to say! Everything is organized and is in the theme. Score: 100/100 Overall, you have a promising terrain skills though it is not bad to read tutorials to be more knowledgeable next time. Also, for adding screenhots to your description I highly recommend you this tutorial made by Legal_Ease, very informative: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...shot-your-map-description-241054/#post2416435 Tutorials Final Score: 70.250/100 4/5 Vote for Approval Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[Leorik]

I kinda messed it up in the Credit box...I hope it won't be a problem...

 

[Legal_Ease]

Its not really a problem as long as you mention everyone, but you can always fix it. Use the

button.

Also, please add screenshots.
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorial-submission-283/how-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/#post2416435

 

[Binsu]

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Hell_Master Map Name: Kingdom of Riverdown Map Author: Leorik Originality Quite a decent theme for the terrain template you made, a peaceful town also being inhabited by unknown demons and cretures at places though I do think it could use some more interesting ideas. Still, good job so far! Score: 61/100 Presentation Decent presentation for the descriptions here at hive and a very informative description at in-game! Though what quite strikes is that you used template for the descriptions, I know it is fine but it is always good to discover ways on BB Codes and make something different than overused templates (not meanting to offend creators just saying that being original at some points does make it worth it!). Also, please do take your time putting some screenshots for this map mostly it is a Template, it requires one for users to see your map and it is also in our rules to be informative in your map as possible. Score: 55/100 Terrain Terrain is good, well-detailed though grasses are much spammed and could be lessen at some points and good tile variation makes it better. Though the terrain is much flat, also trees could use more scaling sizes for we all know in real life, trees are big in sizes and lastly, instead of using cliffs, you could put some doodads acting as walls like rock to better make it realistic and not blizzard-ish though this suggestions are recommended if you aim for much more realistic quality in your map. Score: 65/100 Object Data Nothing much of a problem, good to say! Everything is organized and is in the theme. Score: 100/100 Overall, you have a promising terrain skills though it is not bad to read tutorials to be more knowledgeable next time. Also, for adding screenhots to your description I highly recommend you this tutorial made by Legal_Ease, very informative: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...shot-your-map-description-241054/#post2416435 Tutorials Final Score: 70.250/100 4/5 Vote for Approval Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[Fury63]

good map dude