It seems that you have added more places I see from the minimap. Dling now. Will make a review sooner or later.
EDIT: My Review:
Terrain: Oh awesome, I give it 1/5. Really, the terrain could use some improvements. Those short walls should be made higher using Ctrl+PageUp. And floors should have REAL floors, not ground and pebbles. And some places were to plain too. E.G the pool. Pool: Suggest a changing area (an unenterable building), fences, real guy-with-panties, and blocks to boundary the pool.
Gameplay: Oh great, I give it 2/5. Really, it definetly needs some improvements. For example some jobs. The jobs is somewhat like...charity? the employers just paid you money each time you stepped into a beacon. I haven't reviewed them all, cause this isn't really worth playing. I can't RP freely with this.
Overall: Oh fcking awesome, 1.5/5. This map really need a lot of improvements, yeah. Listen to what other people says, and take them into consideration. For now I can only reject this until it's updated.