Jump Slam v1.02

[Moderator]

11:58, 21st Dec 2009
TriggerHappy:

Review for Spell

This is not MUI, or MPI for that matter. A 0.01 timer interval is to low and you are leaking.

Status

Feel free to message me here if you have any issues with my review or if you have updated your resource and want it reviewed again.

Rejected

 

[Rmx]

Read the rules.

The spell isn't MUI, leaks, laggs if casted several times, contain a cinematic in the begining that made me not Give you credits at all " Do not display this in a spell based map as a cinematc ".

Again i repeat, read the rules.

IF your having trouble with leaks, MUI ext...

Go to Triggers and Scripts section, they or i will help there

 

[Sheephunter]

Ok I will fix it, Thx for the report

 

[Septimus]

this is not the first time you upload spells without looking at the rules

Please test and get feedback regarding your spells at trigger and script section before you upload it.

 

[NFWar]

Hmmm gona take a look... Downloading...

EDITED:
I saw the map. You leak Effect_Point (dont know if you leak more, looked map fast).
Spell dont do any dmg when Blademaster is landing.
Dont recomend to put this spell at map with deep water areas. Blademaster after lending at water returns to closest land location.
Blademaster dont jump with parabola. The traectory he do is /\ like that. It will see clearly if someone will make Blademaster jump higher.
Or put model of some missile instead of Blademaster.
3.5/5 from me

 

[Sheephunter]

Thx for the rating.

 

[Cheezeman]

Thunder clam! :xxdd:
Anyway I'll check it out and give guidelines (updating or posting a new post when done)

-------- Edit --------
- Why the second if/then/else statement in Jump Move?
- Is not MUI. I think it could be made MPI, and that's enough for me (since it's GUI)
Other than this, I couldn't find anything messed up. I think the MPI part could be made by a loop, but be careful that you don't loop 12x of Jump Move every 0.01 second; it can get very laggy.

 

[Sheephunter]

I can fix the evry 0.01 on 1.03

 

[Gamecrafter_DK]

Yo man... not gonna look at the spell, just dropping by, for the SPELLing!!!

This is one of my best Spell i ever maded, is wrong
This is one of the best spells i've ever made, is right

'I don't know if its MUI and i don't think so', strictly, noone will tell you this is wrong, but the sentence can be optimised, just lookie here:

'I don't know if this spell is MUI, and i don't think so either', but, it's all up to you.

'Report all buggs and leakes and irly fix it.', is wrong.
'please (optional) Report all bugs and leaks, so i can fix them (or then i'll fix them.)', is right

discription XXX
description

Takin' the whole sentence here:

'Jump, Cast it at any point and your hero will move to that point by flying, When he lads he will slam in to the ground whit the weapon and makes a thunder clam.', is faulty

'Cast this spell on any point, and your hero (or maybe replaced by the blademaster) will jump there, and, when he lands, he will slam the ground with his weapon, causing a thunderclap.', Better, right :3?

'Give Credits if you use this is your map or campain! ', stop using capitalized letters in the middle of sentences. :3

'Give credits if you use this spell in your map or campaign! ' Muuuch better :3

v1.02:
The caster Does no longer jump like this:
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---------*----*------------
-------*--------*----------
Now he jumps like this:
------------*--------------
-------*--------*----------
------*----------*---------
------*----------*---------
More like a real jump.

Here! i hope it helps!

 

[Cheezeman]

Why are all your i:s small? If you're refering to yourself, which I suppose you are, always capitalize the I.
Like I do.

 

[Gamecrafter_DK]

Oh, yeah, forgot that one, thanks m8!

 

[Krylix]

dude the spelling is mad.

maded

leakes and irly

lads

clam

Dose

jumpslike

Morpe

How do you expect people to want to check out the ability, which I think is great if the spelling is so terrible you have to spend time to try understand what you saying in the description before even reaching the trigger itself . Shamefulll

 

[Gamecrafter_DK]

... Man, you just stole what i just made... get original -.-

And, you don't even know how to set commas dude XD

 

[Sheephunter]

Why dose ppl hate evryone whit dyxleksy? :/

 

[Afooa]

No clue, tbh i like Your spell, he flies a bit too fast for me tho;P
+Gamecrafter_DK ... there are already millions of spells in warcraft 3, everything You made step by step could be found on other site done by other guy^^ hard to be original this times;P

 

[Gamecrafter_DK]

Hehe, i didn't talk about the spell XD i did it on Krylix, that supposedly also just did a spellcheck after i throughly had done one -.- his aint even complete!

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btnjumpslam-139708/?prev=r=20&page=2

Oh, i almost forgot, i tried to make an icon for your spell, as you wanted... the orc got too dark, and the effects don't look all the same, i'm quite satisfied with the sword through... it's pretty bad :/ but should do... until further notice.

 

[Forgotten_Warlord]

Nice spell. Works great and couldn't find any bugs when using it.

 

[Whisper]

Add Aoe Damage
and mby knockback ?

 

[Moon_assailant]

i think u should add an inertia factor.. like if u jump a certain distance that your unit will slide a little bit due to inertia. u could do something like:
1st trigger
//when the unit hits the ground it sets the inertiastartpoint
inertiastartpoint="position of (unit)"
2nd trigger
inertiaspeed="(jumpdistance*jumpheight)/jumpspeed"
inertiatraveldist="jumpdistance*inertiaspeed"
---- if "distancetraveled" not equal to "inertiatraveldist"
then move "unit" offset by 'inertiaspeed' towards 'facing of triggering unit'
every .03 seconds of game time;
distancetraveled="(getdistancebetween "inertiastartpoint" and "position of (unit)"
---- else turn "this trigger" off.

 

[vietinis]

How to make cooldown for this spell?I tried in object editor-not working..

 

[Arisato]

WOW I LIKE THIS SPELL ONLY IT LEAKS! yeah but i would rather edit this =.= then give u credits

 

[Mellstorm]

I made a jumper based on Jump Slam the essence of the problem is that when a Jumper teleport is used by several players at the same time, they get stuck in flight, is there any way to fix it??Also eliminate the leak . Thanks