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IronRaven.blp

Submitted by Re8eL
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This skin is my first skin, everything is white and gold, with holes in the iron wings and lines on the shoulder pads. sense I'm so new to skinning, I couldn't figure out how to apply an alpha correctly so that it would all ways be invisible in-game. So, to make the skin look better, just add a Trigger like this when the unit is created/spawned. It looks fine without it tho.(0.01% Transparency)

Animation - Change (Unit)'s vertex coloring to (100.00%, 100.00%, 100.00%) with 0.01% transparency

NOTE TO MODS:
I cant figure out how to fix the gray box around the 2 front blades on the cloak, if anyone could help me there, id appreciate it, and tell me what I need to add to get this approved.

Keywords:
White, Warden, Iron, Raven, Hero, Gold, Holy
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22:56, 11th Jul 2008 Dan van Ohllus: All I see is... - A lot of recolor. - A "Bevel & Emboss" filter on the shoulderpads. - Some simple lines (freehand though). You should check out some texture tutorials at the hive forums and learn to make...
  1. 22:56, 11th Jul 2008
    Dan van Ohllus:
    All I see is...
    - A lot of recolor.
    - A "Bevel & Emboss" filter on the shoulderpads.
    - Some simple lines (freehand though).
    You should check out some texture tutorials at the hive forums and learn to make some decent freehand.

    If you don't update it in 10 days with decent freehand, the skin will be rejected.

    Edit:
    [Rejected]
    10 days have went, and still no updates.
     
  2. Re8eL

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    I'm not sure this will get approved or not, but could anyone help me with that gray square around the front two blades on the cloak? I didn't edit the alpha in that area.
     
  3. FrIkY

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    ok, I know this is your first skin, but all I see here is CnP (Copy and Paste) and recolor. You just changed the armor color and her skin is the same. If you make armor freehand, without just recoloring something, and make her skin look humanish, with human skin color, or color of a blood elf, I think this will look better

    2/5 - I would rate it 1/5, but since it's your first work on a skin
     
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    really buddy, too much CnP! u_u Nice with the armor color though, although i agree with FrIkY about the color of the skin and face. >>DO SOME MORE FREEHAND<< and how 'bout trying to do some engraving on her armor. (particulary wheres the the team color, 'cause i saw that you can make holes) And i don't know why....i think that she would look kick-ass in black and gold. (specialy with the ornaments i've mentioned earlier)

    Oh my god, i really went into critique... (^_^;;; not a bad piece, but it needs reworking. 3/5
     
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    Alright I will try my best to make it blood-elfish, and I will also put engravings on the armor. I will also experiment more with the alpha channel..

    Can somebody explain to me how i can make things invisible without adding transparency vis triggers, how to make a skin transparent w/o triggers, and how can i put team color wherever I want?
     
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    Maybe noone realised .. but the Gray Spot there is on the Original model/skin too ...
     
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    Updated:
    -Now looks like a Blood Elf
    -Sleeve is Black.
    -Black markings on Armor
    -Black markings on Cloak
    -Fixed purple marking on legs

    to see the edits you really have to look at it in a model viewer.. I never do freehand, so im starting to try everything that way : /
     
    Last edited: Jul 8, 2008
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    Neeeh, do her a flaming red hair, do temcolor engravings, strip her of that nasty... triko? give her naked legs, naked tummy, naked.......n-never mind that last (Naked......) *^_^* put sexy ripps on her cloak, to see the beautiful skin. If yo do that, i'll rep you.
     
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    you got -5 Rep so how would you +rep someone ? ...
     
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    Lol, you don't have to do that... about the skin, I see you changed it and I like it how it looks but, making something freehand is not just some black lines on armor. First try to make armor freehand using some of the tutorials
    http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f281/texturing-armour-45626/
    Skinning Realistic Metal Armour - Wc3campaigns
    Basic metal light reflection - Wc3campaigns
    Easy Skinning Tutorial - Metal - Wc3campaigns
    then you can draw that lines

    4/5 - make her armor freehand and it's 5/5
     
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    FrIkY? What do you not aprove, red hair? Naked legs, tummy..? Ripps on the cloack? What? i think this all is nice.
     
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    You make it sound like that she would have been attacked by raper >_>
     
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    still MUCH recolour...
    freehand the armor
     
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    Recolour and poor freehand markings. Learn to freehand, recolours will not be accepted.
     
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    so i was reading about mip maps, how to you make it so a 256x256 image, appears 256x256 in game?
     
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    working on it -.-

    EDIT:

    Actually, I like how this skin looks, I'm going to begin on another model, using as much freehand as I can think of...

    Do what you wish with this submission(i think it looks nice tho ^^)
     
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    Maybe Holy Raven but is cnped.