In the name of Yourself

[Moderator]

14:31, 1st Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[light bolt30]

Fix up description, doesn't tell me what's this campaign is about.

 

[qurion2]

yep, i have fixed it
i hope you enjoy...
even if it could be much better, if I only would have the time...

 

[irock9645696]

It would be more interesting if you have some screenshots

 

[Septimus]

But this campaign make me problems, the game chrashes,

If it crash, why upload it here.

 

[qurion2]

If it crash, why upload it here.

well it crashes on my low PC
i didnt had the time to change much.
well i mean it isnt the usual crash

this: war3.exe had found a problem and need to closed dont appear.

it only close without any messege or something like that.

usually it only happen if the Pc have low CPU

 

[AIagremm]

Well, i think i dont want to make Credits, becouse there are really many skins and models, and other ideas, i only will make Credits IF this is neseccary.

Dude! You want your map to be rejected? Put the names of the people who's resources you used, pay some respect to those who helped you!

Anyway, sounds interesting, I think I will play it, but I highly recommend you to improve the descritption.

 

[dexm]

I am going to play this but please fix the descritption.

 

[Legion_King]

Well, there are some bugs I found,
first of all, in the Prolog chapter, Arthas must die after reinforcements and it's somehow unknown and hard to find out unless you open the map with world edit and see the victory conditions.
In the second mission, after you were known as a survivor, when they give you an armor, it appears on the head instead of chest/body.
Also I give 0/5 for the terrain, what the hell is it?
Will edit this post soon.

 

[Dj0z]

Reading this description (or should i say trying to) gave me a headache...

 

[aldwyn]

well
0/5 for terrain
2/5 for grammar
i got version of warcraft for my language, CZ, you say that the paladin from start of the male campaign is named Halahk, but when i start to play, he is named Jarin Životabudič (something like Jarin ressrecter in ENG) and your cahracter is named Player, LoL...
i tought it will be kind of great campaign when i seen imported campaign screen and music, but it was HORRIBLE.

Recreate terrain and make the dialogues slower, sometimes they say like 4 rows long texts, and you give 5 seconds for it.

1/5 for this. Rework this campaign completely and maybe i give like 3/5.

Well, my grammar is also horrible, but description of iron sword "Gives 20Samage" is horrible.

 

[AIagremm]

Description is much better! ^^

 

[irock9645696]

Although some of the descriptions can be placed into hidden tag

 

[Kiamati]

well it crashes on my low PC
i didnt had the time to change much.
well i mean it isnt the usual crash

this: war3.exe had found a problem and need to closed dont appear.

it only close without any messege or something like that.

usually it only happen if the Pc have low CPU

I have the same problem, any idea?

 

[mouseman89]

well it crashes on my low PC
i didnt had the time to change much.
well i mean it isnt the usual crash

this: war3.exe had found a problem and need to closed dont appear.

it only close without any messege or something like that.

usually it only happen if the Pc have low CPU

happens to me too, i have a band new computer, maybe something with the triggers ?

 

[Deadbringers]

well
i got version of warcraft for my language, CZ, you say that the paladin from start of the male campaign is named Halahk, but when i start to play, he is named Jarin Životabudič (something like Jarin ressrecter in ENG)...

Same problem , i also got CZ version of warcraft

 

[CaoSong]

***SPOILERS***

Prologue: errrr... how are you supposed to lose this level? the giant Abomination was way easy to kill between Arthas' Holy light and Garathos's war stomp... I actually had to intentionally kill off my own units and send Arthas off into the corner to get surrounded and overwhelmed... need to make the enemies stronger after the big Abomination appears otherwise a good player will never lose that level.

Chapter 1: Have no problems with the map really other then the poor grammar. Map is mediocre, but I hate the locked camera...

Chapter 2: Immediately I noticed a bug... after my player went through the portal, it disappeared before the rest of my units could get through... I got overwhelmed and killed while trying to move through the city.

Maps: 2/5 (only 3 maps, and they're average at best)
Difficulty: 1/5 (Prologue is much too easy... other 2 maps are easy as well)
Storyline: 2/5 (I like the idea, but typo's and poor grammar really hurt you here)
Overall: 1.6/5 (Needs work, but it's more promising then some of the other maps I've played)

 

[light bolt30]

Fix your grammer mistakes in your description.

 

[Agrameer]

im dling now gonna check it out, seems interesting enough

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Agrameer

 

[Legion_King]

You should create a changelog and write each changes you made on each update.

 

[mouseman89]

ok... i see a problem with the triggers in going west, theyre ordered 7 orders at once than removed from the game (the moving triggers)

 

[fancy]

well it crashes on my low PC
i didnt had the time to change much.
well i mean it isnt the usual crash

this: war3.exe had found a problem and need to closed dont appear.

it only close without any messege or something like that.

usually it only happen if the Pc have low CPU

It crashes for me to!
And don't think like my comp is low.
It runs pretty much everything decent.
It crashes at mission 3, when you have that big battle with the guys trapped in the "city" and then you chose where to go. There it crashes.

 

[Hawk]

Well if this is DEMO campaign you should really work on the terrain,triggers and the grammar.In the last chapter i can't control any of the unit & the second chapter is not starting,i like the description here it's nice but you should add screenshots/videos.Rating 2/5.

 

[matej]

If it crash, why upload it here.

its crash to me too..in last map when it show me dialog massage, game just crash..

 

[CaoSong]

Played till about halfway through "Take the town back" before I died, didnt get any crashes

 

[Kuhneghetz]

--unknown
(couse' there is nor name in the readme or theres no readme)
please tell me if ya' know the people who had made them:
-Skins
Shandris(exported from another map

-Modele
Assassin(no name in readme
Holy Knigth(no readme)
BloodelfPhönix Crusader (no name in readme)
Crystal Golem (no readme)
Death Knight/Undead Knigth (no readme)
Drenai Paladin (no readme)
Dwarven Pack(no readme)
Hero Ranger(exported from another map)
Japanese House(no readme)
Judah(no readme)
Ifrit (no readme)
Female Elf Enforce(no readme)
HeroBloodKnigth(no readme again)
Shortsword(couldnt finde the archiv)
Teron(no name in readme)
Ship01(cant find archive)

I've found all of the unknown authors of these resources and will correct them here.

Skins:

Shandris.blp - By Black_Stan
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/skins-552/shandris-61113/

Models:

Assassin (the human with crossbow) - by Miseracord
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/assassin-47551/

Holy Knight - by Phoenix-IV
http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?t=84220

Blood Elf Phoenix Crusader - by General Frank
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/bloodelf-phoenix-crusader-48332/

Crystal Golem - by Mc !
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/crystalgolem-49745/

Undead Knight / Deathknight - by jigrael
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/undeadknigth-48012/

Draenai Paladin - by AnemicRoyalty (also known as A.R. in Hiveworkshop)
http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?t=90568

Dwarven Pack (axe thrower + axe missile, adventurer, hammer guard, miner, paladin + stormbolt missile) - by General Frank
http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?t=93537

Hero Ranger - by Dan van Ohllus
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/hero-ranger-pre-beta-look-like-130940/

Japanese House - by Gmish_57
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/japanesehouse-47351/

Judah - by Miseracord
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/judah2-sword-2a-47613/

Ifrit - by Oniwaga
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/ifrit_03-a-48097/

Female Elf Enforcer - by Wyrwuulfe
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/female-elf-enforcer-48029/

Hero Blood Knight - by Tenebis
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/herobloodknight-50578/

Short sword - by Kitabatake
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/shortsword-120596/

Teron / Teron Gorefiend - by Necrokenis
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/teron-gorefiend-48445/

Ship / Battleship - by StormLord
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/batleship-52627/

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the Group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing campaigns/cinematics :

You are breaking a few rules :

This is a demo, but uploaded maps must be near completion and not in alpha stage or a demo.
Second, you've written some weird things in your description :

I want to add a few Events like if you choose female there will be a place where a few males are, who want to rape ya' then, -trying, or die trying it.

Status : Rejection