HeroArchmage.BLP

[Moderator]

14:59, 2nd Sep 2008
Hawkwing:
[Approved]
The hair and cloth could have been done a lot better, but the rest of the skin is fairly good quality.

 

[Hawkwing]

My only concerns are the following:

Negative Comments:

[-] The lava cracks need to be sunken into the skin versus sittng on top. Right now they are a bit too 'visible' like this, sitting on top of the skin.
[-] The trimming (runes) on the robes look a bit weird. I guess they need some more shadows/highlights.
[-] The hair could've been done a bit better. Perhaps a thicker brush.
[-] Could have used a tiny bit more shadows, but it's not a huge deal.

Positive Comments:

[+] Excellent colour choice.
[+] Fair amount of appropriately placed shadows/highlights.
[+] General appearance is nice.

Comments: In general the shadows need some tweaking. Otherwise, brilliant!

Overall Rating: 4.1/5

 

[FamousPker49]

Thanks for the rating. And I see what you mean about the runes on the robe, I wasn't really sure what to do with it, and I rushed the hair quite abit.

I also tried to sink them in, but didn't have a great method for that...

 

[Hawkwing]

The hair isn't a huge deal. It's not very visible in-game. It took me awhile to figure out how to fix the lava-cracks too. You could've just added shadows above the lava cracks. But it'd be kinda hard.

 

[Celaquil]

woot?! Famous you skinning?! Anyways, nice skin ^^

 

[Bluebay]

Very nice ! I like the horse and the head on the portrait !
You've done a good work

 

[pyropk95]

finally, a decent arch mage..plus theirs not many of these

 

[shamanyouranus]

It looks like he's riding on a wooden horse

 

[Blood Raven]

not bad, but some shading wont hurt anyway...

 

[Engkanto]

i could use this for a deathwing that isn't corrupted!