Guard WIP

[Thyrael]

This is a WIP of my newest made-from-scratch-model. A Cityguard. I was inspired by the roman army.





The texture isn't complete yet. It justs to locate which parts needs highlights/shadows etc.

/discuss

 

[Burning_Dragoon5]

It looks quite good so far (the texture >< it is, well, annoying)

I've seen some things that would need to be fixed:

- The upper arms look too round, I think you should try to enhance it
- The chest looks a little big, well, when we look at the model overall, it looks weird because of the proportions legs-chest. That's my opinion.
- you should model half-closed hands, not a open one: it'll be easier to animate it without having the feeling that the hands are "wierd"

Remember, that's my opinion, feel free to do whatever you want

May we see the wireframes? especially to see the elbow joints.

 

[Thyrael]

First, thanks fo your reply and your critic.

- The upper arms look too round, I think you should try to enhance it

I will narrow them a little

- The chest looks a little big, well, when we look at the model overall, it looks weird because of the proportions legs-chest. That's my opinion.

That's the result of the cameraangle and the texture, in gameview the model looks more realistic^^

- you should model half-closed hands, not a open one: it'll be easier to animate it without having the feeling that the hands are "wierd"

The hands are open, cause they will be animated => f.e. open => close around a weapon etc

Nevertheless thanks for your intereset. More WIP's will be linked soon.

Thy

 

[Mechanical Man]

Lol it reminds me about homm3 titan

 

[Hawkwing]

The arms are much bigger than the legs. He has a tiny head. Etc. Generally just bad proportions.

 

[Thyrael]

Another WIP.

- narrowed the arms
- changed propotions of several bodyparts
- startet to edit the texture(chest almost done)




/discuss

Thy

 

[Hawkwing]

Shrink his shoulders a bit and narrow his chest a bit, pulling the arms and shoulder pads inward a bit. Having a smaller chest will make his head look bigger and more realistic. The texture should cause him to still look buff, don't worry. ^_^

 

[crl]

Try to make him a bit darker