Gluttony

[Warseeker]

The original picture is broken?

 

[The_Silent]

It is in the icon contest too. Not sure why it failed here when it seems to work there.
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...en-deadly-sins-279674/index5.html#post2834336

 

[ArneXis]

A bit hard to make out, but at a second glance it look alright I guess.

 

[The_Silent]

 

[Ginufe]

I feel like this picture could be used ALOT on hive.

Though, I think it's kind of hard to tell what is really happening on the picture, but then again, that adds to the possibility of being used for more than just one purpose.
I'd suggest you defining the picture a bit more. Make the fat demon stand out. I also feel like his right hand could be worked on a bit more. I know he's supposed to look fat, but I doubt you'd have such bulge on your hand like this.
I PERSONALY (notice this word) would probably choose to make a better composition. The angle you chose seems good enough, I'd just zoom more in so that you can capture more expression of the icon in the small resolution you get for icons.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The contest's judges(Icon Contest #14 - Results) have already pointed out some things that could be improved.
I suggest you to make improvements considering the judges' observations.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

There's no update in sight. If you plan to update it, let me know.
Moved to S/TS section.

 

[Aleister]

Uhmmm... well, the chicken pieces looks like... you know.
Try with more colors and realism.