Frozen Jail

[Gost]

Heres a screenshot of a frozen jail I decided to make, spent about 20 minutes on it, the large majority of that was getting the damned walls to line-up evenly -.-. Anyways any critiques or helpful hints would be appreciated. This really is my. . . . 2nd? Terrain I've even remotely tried at all on but I enjoy terraining so I hope to improve my skillz.

Memo
Regarding Screenshot: 0.04A
Just showing you guys what it looks like from above, the inside is'nt finished and I've been just fooling around, i need to find a way to make jail cells that looks good. . . .
Memo
Regarding Screenshot: 0.04WH
The outside of the warden's house, not complete yet. I don't really like it's look idk it needs something...
Memo
Regarding Screenshot: 0.04IWH
The inside of the warden's house, not complete yet. Don't really like this either, prob going to change it up somehow.

Frozen Jail -Front- Version:0.01F

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Frozen Jail -Front- Version: 0.02F

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Frozen Jail -Front- Version: 0.03F

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Frozen Jail -Front- Version: 0.04F

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Frozen Jail -Aerial View- Version: 0.04A

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Frozen Jail -Warden's House- Version: 0.04WH

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Frozen Jail -Inside Warden's House- Version: 0.04IWH

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Frozen Jail -Front- Version: 0.05F

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[Gilles]

Not bad I really don't like that hill though, The one sticking up in the middle. I would make it more flat.

 

[Belgarath]

Quite nice, except it looks more like a fort than a prison; you should add a few cages outside, different guards, flatten out that hill and probably add a weather region for the entire map of Outland Wind (Heavy) to block out the edge.

 

[Nudl9]

Ohh, i really like this, very original and freezy looking!
Im gonna disagree with Gilles about that cliff though, it just looks a bit high at first view, but if you looks closely it looks pretty ok!
+rep!

 

[Oziris]

It's quit nice i like it!

 

[Craka_J]

It is really good, but the pier stands out way too much. Maybe add some snowy stuff on it or something. Tinting it darker might help too.
~Craka_J

 

[<Offspring>]

Looks nice, tho you should do something about the edge.

 

[Gost]

Thanks for all of the responses! I've updated the picture a little with some of your idea in mind, check it out.

EDIT: Updated it agian.

 

[<Offspring>]

good job, looks better now.

 

[Craka_J]

Sky doesn't blend well with the terrain. Make sure you apply a white fog and that it adds itself to the sky.

Example

That is a good example of what I am talking about.
~Craka_J

 

[Gost]

Alright fixed the sky, but before I update the picture, how do i hide a picture within a hide/show button?

 

[Belgarath]

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Craka, where'd you get those doodads? And what tiles are those actually?

 

[robot-dude]

very nice, and i love the jail

 

[seruk]

I really like it, just do something about the background and it'll be reppable.

 

[Gost]

Updated: All versions uploaded to better see the proggresion of the project.

 

[Naze]

Hey, here's an example of a nice terrain. Only a thing: the dead tree outside looks strange. It does'nt looks natural.... it is so "Warcrafty". But the terrain is exelent.


--Nice use of ground textures--

 

[THE_END]

Change that ship to an undead one and make the Warden a Lich, go for the "Lich King's prison for his most important P.O.W.s"

 

[gavdaman88]

Very nice! The models used for the prison look really nice too, and that ground texture is great!

 

[Josh]

Only thing that I think is bad is that there is too much floating ice at the pier, wouldnt the ship be scraping wood off, and then sink? But besides that, pretty good.