Fortress of the Eagle

[Ziggen]

Deep in the forests at the top of a cliff, can you see the magnificent fortress built by the eagle-worshiping humans.
In times of war, the humans gather around the statue and pray to the eagle god.

Updated terrain to the right.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Put one more huge tower there and it would be epic

 

[Wolfhelm]

Thats cool, i like the variation in trees and background is epic.

The castle is good but im not feeling those towers coming out in front and whatever that archway is under the big roof.

 

[~Void~]

Imo the eagle should be on top of the tower.

 

[Ziggen]

Great idea Void, I'll move it to the tower. And Xerex, where should I put another huge tower?

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Behind the statue somewhere.
That area just looks kinda empty without any huge tower there D:

 

[Linaze]

For an untrained eye like mine, this looks pretty damn good. I'm especially very fond of the sky.

 

[Celaquil]

I dont agree with the statue thing, for all I care you could remove it all together, as the texture and shit on it looks fugly. Appart from that its a pretty damn badass terrain

 

[Megafyr]

Very nice terrain. Love the way the rocks look. Good job. The castle could use some higher towers in it, because now it looks very flat. +rep

 

[Ziggen]

Okay, thanks for all suggestions. I've made some big changes now, decreased the size of the eagle, put up some towers and stuff, see for yourself.
And I couldn't move the eagle to the front tower because the model has a big ugly thing wich the eagle stands on.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Now that's sexy terrain

 

[Corexx]

Of course the screen isn´t bad but nevertheless nothing special.
Background is good but onehundred times seen at others, the eagle-model sucks as Keiji already mentioned and the architecture isn´t very spectacular ( especially the archways and the long empty walls at the back of the building doesn´t fit ).
Additionally you overskaled the rocks; make them smaller!
Can´t hold the sharp texture of the small pines next to these blurry rockskin.

 

[~Void~]

I thought you said you were going to put the eagle on the end of the bridge D:

 

[Ziggen]

Well, as I wrote in my last post: And I couldn't move the eagle to the front tower because the model has a big ugly thing wich the eagle stands on.

Look at the model next time your in the WE and you'll see.

 

[Dr. House]

im thinking about a word the word is LEGENDARY!!! i really love it nice job.

 

[Dia3olus]

not really legendary or epic but pretty cool. i like the idea of outstanding towers with bridges.
like corexx said the rocks are way too blurry compared to the trees and the walls. also the texture is quite repetitive, use more difrent angles, the rock doodad has more usable sides than his back.
and xXmorpheusXx' bridge there in the middle is horrible, away with it!

 

[Velmarshal]

Holy...
+rep

 

[Ziggen]

Thanks for all the comments guys, I've updated it again, tried to change what you have pointed out.

I have put many small sized rocks on the big ones to cover the stretched textures. I've also changed the sky to a bit more yellowish color, but I'm not sure if I like it that much, and then I have put more windows on some towers.