Forest of Clouds

[Moderator]

Orcnet

08:43, 21th July 2013

Comment

Review

Map Approved

Forest of Clouds (No Version/s Stated) Rate Score Percent Letter 5/5 91-100 A Rate Score Percent Letter 4/5 81-90% B Rate Score Percent Letter 3/5 75-80% C Rate Score Percent Letter 2/5 70-74% D Rate Score Percent Letter 1/5 50-69% F Overview: Gameplay "Total gameplay is fair and well executed, but the idea of really near creep camps to some player bases and expansion sites is a free fall, not a good idea if I might say." Terrain "Terrain is sprouting good but somehow your height leveling needs more stable tone to it, such as your work with the waterfall and the spam use of bush on the west part of the map, do please adjust it more." Management "To my testings, map can be useful and approved." Total Score: Rate Score Percent Letter 8/15 77% C

 

[Binsu]

Introduction

Played your melee and I must say, it has this good terrain for a melee though many coplications are spotted and most are major.

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[tab][tabheader]Good Points:[/tabheader]

• Terrain looks good though empty at many points
• Map has enough resources for a melee map

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[tab][tabheader]Bad Points:[/tabheader]

• Map is not symmetric. Some player positions have bigger spaces and some small and also the player position at the lower right part, there are enemies there so when you build, they will attack your base. And so this includes also, player positioning looks decent though we have same problems in spaces.
• There are too much creeps, one cannot kill at start a large grou of creeps. Remember, players mostly find to creep at early games so at least give them creeps that can be defeated easily at start. And again, we have come to the conclusion that creeps are not balanced also.

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[tab][tabheader]Suggestions:[/tabheader]

• There is still room for improvements in the terrain. You could fill it up with some more decors.
• Make the map symmetric and also fix the player position and the imbalance-ness at the spaces.
• Fix the imbalance-ness also in the creeps. There are too much large groups of creeps to handle which in the start, players cannot defeat easily.

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Comment

Overall, this is a decent melee. It has a good terrain though major complications crushed it and I am very sorry but this is not Approvable at its state unless you fix the problems stated. Good luck and happy mapmaking

Rating: 2/5
Vote: Pending

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

Just updated

News:
-Fixed camera bounds 92x92 playable
-creeps camp now
-fixed paths
-made the map a bit symetric

I hope there will be no more problems
+i cant fix the loot system cause of bad editor version... (1.07)

 

[Binsu]

Thanks, too busy in the past days and right now, have the free time so got the time to review.

 

[Orcnet]

Map approved, see moderator comment on top.

 

[DUTY OF RS]

Umm you got screen shoots?

 

[Twilight]

The terrain is gr8 but description is poor, add some screenshots, use bb codes, add some color
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Rating:
-4/5
Stuff to fix:
-Description needs some work

Don't know how to add screenshots

Click here

First go to your user control panel or userCP, you can find this at the top right of the page, then find networking on your left, below that, find pictures and albums, and start uploading pictures, the code to put pictures on your description is

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

i know how to add screenshots,i dont know how to take them

 

[Twilight]

press PrintScreenSysRq on your keyboard then go to paint pres Ctrl + V and there you have it