First Terrain- Sunkin Ruins

[Tele-Z-Apper]

This is my very first artistic terrain. I did it very fast, just to see if I was any good at it. Tell me if you like it!

Here is another map I just did.

 

[blazing-inferno]

the top one had no tile variation and the trees should be different heights. the grass and shrubs look randomly placed. the second one is a little empty but i like it. they have potential and if you would spend a little more time on them they would turn out pretty well. i would say try to clump the trees together instead of spacing them out like the lower pic. keep on practicing

 

[Darkey]

Horrible. It could ALOT more Doodas, don't be afraid to use environments such as rocks. Shrubs and other stuff could also be added. Some light fog maybe.

The last picture is even worse than horrible imo. A few trees around a lake or so, without no kind of vegetables.

 

[Kimbo]

1.
a)....the sky just...cuts off?
b)Set your model detail to high when trying to show off stuff.
c)TILE VARIATION PLEASE
d)Trees and rocks ..and everything isnt placed so random like that in real life. I suggest you look at some landscape images... LOOK AT THEM.
e)Give it fog...its..too....thin and..just blant atm with no atmosphere.

2.
a)Those plants dont sit in the middle of the lake, they sit on the shallow sides.
b)TREES ARE NOT PLACED LIKE THAT IN REAL LIFE.
c)TILE VARIATIONx42
d)Sky cut off
e)needs more fog or better fog.
f)wait..wtf is a tree doing in the bank?

Seriously.. you need to do alot more work, study photographs...seriously.. IMHO its horrible.....just..to blant for my taste...

 

[Rui]

This is not artistic. The first one looks horrible, and the second is unfinished, and don't tell me that it isn't, because I only see trees, catails, lumpy grass and rock.

 

[Tele-Z-Apper]

Sigh, the second one is a horrible picture. The rest of the map actually looks a lot better.
Weird, I added fog to both of them....

Can someone please tell me why the picture cuts off on the second one!? There is a lot more stuff behind the lake.

I kind of forgot that those only grow in shallow water, I remembered on the first. Oo

The trees do look like they are planted in a line from the view, they look a lot diffrent from a diffrent view.

Okay, okay, thank you for the harshness! I didn't think it was all the great, just wanted to see what people see as okay.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Raise the terrain,dont stuff it with trees place the doodads more with care,and maybe add some special effects of customize the size of doodads