If you want feedback, you should use map development instead of map section. This section reserves for complete work.
As far as I see the item drop, it seems to be inbalance. A level 10 dragon drop level 5 permanent item? That doesn't seem to be reasonable enough.
Creep selection doesn't seems to mix either. A dragon with bandit?
Also, why black dragon drop a red drake egg? Doesn't make any sense at here.
Some of the creep facing position was randomly set up.
As for terrain, some specific point lack of tiles variation and need to adjust the height as it was way too smooth.
The current status was likely to be 2/5 (Lacking).