Early Morning Tundra

[Naze]

Here it is. And criticism is welcome!

Link to the updated terrain!!!

 

[TheToastedChicken]

it looks too flat. make more hills

 

[raid1000]

ahhh didnt u saw a flat natural surface before?
very nice i like the sky the most
+rep!!!

 

[TheToastedChicken]

as it's now i cant see any unique with it.

 

[Celaquil]

Yeah, its flat, but for some reason it looks good this way, maybe just a LITTLE more hight on the locations where theres not snow in the background, and the shrubs need a little more tinting to go with the rest of the grass, and maybe use snow rocks instead of normal rocks, or mix them? Anyways, overall a good and well done piece ^^

 

[TheToastedChicken]

i agree with keiji, dont make too high hills.

 

[raid1000]

i need to know how u made it like streched out like that
pls tell me :O

 

[~Void~]

You're getting quite good at those mountains in the background!

The foreground is kinda meh though. A tundra has forests and empty plains. This is more of a combination of the two.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

The backround (not the hills) could use more doodads.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

wow thiz is nice.

its not epic, but it is definetly beutiful

 

[Gilles]

You're getting quite good at those mountains in the background!

The foreground is kinda meh though. A tundra has forests and empty plains. This is more of a combination of the two.

I like the background as well. First thing I noticed.
The very foreground looks really good to me as well. Did you mean the midground more Void? I think that's where it hurts the screen. There are too many little islands of rocks and they are all relatively the same shape and size. Variate more.

 

[Naze]

i need to know how u made it like streched out like that
pls tell me :O

How, "streched"? What is streched on that pic? 0.o

I like the background as well. First thing I noticed.
The very foreground looks really good to me as well. Did you mean the midground more Void? I think that's where it hurts the screen. There are too many little islands of rocks and they are all relatively the same shape and size. Variate more.

Yes, I noticed an overall complain about the midground. And very good hint with the islands, Gilles, thank you.

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NEW SHOT, with the flaws fixed.

 

[raid1000]

crap tats even nicer!
add some sun rays and its ace!
and i hound out about the strechy bit nwm
and the stars near the sun should be removed imo

 

[TheToastedChicken]

im not sure if im confortable with the last one. couldnt u change it to the moon instead?

 

[Naze]

Yes, the stars near the sun. Too bad, I can't select them anymore, because they're too much... :\

A moon? I prefer a morning thing, because in the night we don't see much things, due to the dark, making the terrain more boring. And also, I am very bad with moons... I have to train that!

 

[~Void~]

Well the new one... you kinda screwed up the mountains, and I don't get why there is brightness on the sides of the mountains we see, they would be shadowy...

 

[thedeathunterxx]

wow so perfect.

a bit more lighting ( like the northern lights )
would make this EPIC!

luv the way the sun is on the horizon, like the sun near the poles., where it isn't in the sky, its always on the horizon

+REP!!!

 

[Naze]

Yes, maybe Ive spread the light too much.

And I made the mountains smaller, because in tundras, mountains aren't actually like that ones in the 1st post.

 

[Gilles]

They are in that world. If something looks good, and Void and myself tell you it's good, the chances are it is, and you should leave it.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

hmm i just noticed that our winter screenies look very similiar...

i didn't realize.
i didn't copy the idea or anything xD

i just got inspiration from your starry sky, and Voids mountains.

lol gj anyway

 

[Naze]

Holy crap, you just revived a thread that was dead for 17 days!!! =P

Yeah, they might look similar. I love winter sceneries... I got the inspiration of this terrain by a Metallica's song called Fade to Black. But not Metallica's, but Sonata Arctica's cover of the song.

Yeah, I know you're the hip-hop guy and might not like that song, but dude, that is cold...

 

[thedeathunterxx]

lol i revived a bunch of your threads just now xD

and ur right i dont know the song .

but im not a closed minded person. i like some rock music. my best friend is in a band so...


lol

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

The snow fits great there.I like it.

 

[Craka_J]

Looks really great, /Naze! I have little to criticize about this, so I'll leave it be with a +rep and a good job.

~Craka_J