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DranaiAkama.blp

Submitted by Dentothor
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
Narcainian Savage


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Several disputes about who technically owned North America happened from 2019 to 2054 eventually, President Gaelen ordered Mexico to hand over their land or a Nuclear missile would stain it. Eventually, the Canadians ended up in this dispute. It was on September 11th 2060 that the Americans then completely lost their minds in madness and let off an Ununquadium Bomb along the Mexican Coast (America had several scientific breakthroughs with the unknown elements, ununtrium, ununquadium, and ununpentium. Ununhexium and ununoctium are still unknown). The bomb chemically altered certain species and the others it killed (humans being one of them). It killed around 3,000,000 Mexicans that day. Realizing what they had done, they sent a Bio Team into Mexico to see if there were any survivors.

It turns out that one of the altered species was Insects. These insects had developed a superior instinct and agility. The Americans then had to lay peace to these creatures. But they had also developed minds... In 2065, President Gaelin had arrived to commune with the creatures of which he decided to call, Narcainians. But when he arrived, they had developed weapons and a small nation. When Gaelin ordered them to stand down, They ripped his head off.

They then dumped the Narcainians into a secluded area in Mexico, where they could be watched constantly. It was called Section 6. But with the Narcainian minds developing faster than the humans could, there was no telling what they could do.

In this specific class, The savage was trained in bloodthirsty combat. it has quick reflexes and is trained to adapt to any physical or mental condition that it may come across. A one on one combat with this creature is a bad idea.

Changelog
1.0 Original Concept
1.1 Fixed Blurr and Changed Sword colours and concept



Keywords:
Alien, Assassin, Dentothor, Black, Saw, Sword, Glowing, Orange, Doom, Verdugo
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Narcanian Savage (Texture)

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13:18, 23rd Oct 2009 67chrome: It's not as good as the others, but It's nice to see draenei skins. If you plan on doing more of these, try making them to the quality of your best skins. This skin also seems to have the same problems your other...
  1. 13:18, 23rd Oct 2009
    67chrome: It's not as good as the others, but It's nice to see draenei skins. If you plan on doing more of these, try making them to the quality of your best skins. This skin also seems to have the same problems your other skins did when you initially submitted them as well, at least this skin seems to lack the right amount of shading, shading black and white is harder than other colors, but still. Anyways, approved, but I expect changes XD
     
  2. Dentothor

    Dentothor

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    <(Subscribzorz)>
     
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    The weapons look like mandarin orange slices. I think they could use a bit of improvement.
     
  4. Crazed_seal2

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    I was the 1st to download this skin wootz wafflez

    WootZ, Another Narcainian Dude. When your finished the entire race you should like make a pack full of them. :) :thumbs_up: Another Great success
    i think.
     
  5. Alagremm

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    Awesome skin Dent! ^^
    It looks cool, plus it is one of your new race skins, plus its an Akama skin!
    However it needs some improvement, and I think that you should use the color you used for the rest of your skin's blades. Orange looks cool, but the color you used here, really does look like orange slice.
     
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    I think that darkening the weapons just a tiny bit wouldn't hurt
     
  7. Bernkastel

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    This is first of these i dont like..
     
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    too blurry
     
  9. Misha

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    cool.. but you should sharpen it up a bit, add some black on the top of those blades, and also rework that orange mouth thingie.. it doesn't suit the skin.
     
  10. Arowanna

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    Way to messy.
    Try to "improve" everything, it's to scratchy, or something.
     
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    Not as good as ur others, sorry.
     
  12. Dentothor

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    yeah imma darken up the blades a lot. try and make em look like the assassin's. the reason its so blurry is the fact that i tried to shrink it down a bit. when i realized the details were lost, i sized it back up. :p

    Ill try and make the teeth silver. i think that would suit it a bit more.
     
  13. Misha

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    why not.. completely omit the teeth? your previous ones didn't have teeth.. or did they? o_O
     
  14. Alagremm

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    But Akama model has huge teeth, that cannot be hidden... however he change them into something else, or even alpha-out.
     
  15. Dentothor

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    hmm. ill try that out Misha. if that doesn't look good, they shall be silver. :p

    K. i didnt like the look of the alpha teeth, so i made them silver. fixed the blade and detailed the whole skin much better
     
    Last edited: Oct 17, 2009
  16. Misha

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    i was thinking of hidin' the teeth with black, but this is cool too. :3
     
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    the shoulderpads are a bit blurry imo, but for else it looks good :)
     
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    Rofl, Akama has been put to use,
    The insect corruption made me Rofl & almost drop the Laptop
    True though, Draenei look like Mutant robotic Insects (With skin on daily basis)
     
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    Not as good as the others but it have a cool look :D