Defiled Land

[Moderator]

21:20, 9th Mar 2014
Hell_Master: Fix your descriptions. Either use Map Description Generator (requires java) or Map Description Templates. Set to Awaiting Update.

 

[IamFootman061]

Please read this tutorials:
Map Description - Templates
How to add screenshot to your map Description
Those two is about Description making. If you don't have a decent description even it's the best map, It will never get approved so please, read them.

 

[Shadow Fury]

Excluding the cheap description, it is a poor map!

- Very flat terrain
- Trees spammed beside each other too closely
- Improper item drops. For example, how can a level 5 Plague Treant have a chance to release items above level 6? I know the chances are very low, but it's wrong anyway
- Same tile variation used on the entire map which is repeated too oftenly
- Lack of doodads, too much parts of the map are empty
- The tavern is guarded

SUGGESTIONS:-
- More hilly terrain
- Don't use the same tile variation on the entire map, it gets repetitive
- Don't spam Canopy Trees so near to each other
- Have a look at the item drops. Don't make only one Item Table for all creeps, make more which fit specific creeps
- The Taverns should never be guarded so that players can choose a Tavern hero as a first hero if they want
- Add more decorative doodads and don't leave very large areas empty
- Consider reading tutorials about terraining

OVERALL RESULT:-
In conclusion, this is a cheap tiny melee map which doesn't deserve to be approved. Mah, 2/5 and sadly vote for REJECTION

 

[taavidude]

Add some screenshots and improve the description.