Defeat Mannoroth

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Date: 2011/Oct/22 13:08:37 Vengeancekael: VM // PM: Rep Received: 0

Reasons: Poor and lacking terrain: Terrain Tutorial Poor Gameplay, not a lot of originality or fun: General Mapping Tutorials Other: Check out the models section for custom models made by the community: Models Section Check out the skins section for custom skins made by the community: Skins Section Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section Check out this section if you have requests for models, skins, ... : Requests Section Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone If you have any complaints or questions directed towards a moderator, make a thread here: Map Resource Moderation If you think the moderator's judging is unfair or you have overall complaints, make a thread here: Admin Contact Please read the rules thoroughly: Rules Comment: Story-wise nothing original, a very, very short cinematic, the dialogue is horrifyingly bad and not really orcish and the orc leader doesn't sound very wise. The camera work isn't good either, you should move it around the whole time, shake it at times and don't use lock camera at the scene where they're retreating, and move the units properly, not like how they are now, walking into each other, all messy. The terrain is also very empty, barely any terrain tile variation, quite flat and don't spam volcanoes, lightning strikes, etc. The combat scenes are very boring, no slow-motion or anything and random special effects aren't always cool looking.

 

[Arcidemon]

I do not know what you want from me I know not how much English

 

[Vengeancekael]

Then use google translate or something.

 

[Arcidemon]

Now is sucessful?

 

[Vengeancekael]

No, there's no info of the cinematic whatsoever.
Here, use this template: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/

 

[Arcidemon]

And now?

 

[Vengeancekael]

Credit the user that made the taur model and you'll get a review from me tomorrow.

edit:

Story-wise nothing original, a very, very short cinematic, the dialogue is horrifyingly bad and not really orcish and the orc leader doesn't sound very wise.
The camera work isn't good either, you should move it around the whole time, shake it at times and don't use lock camera at the scene where they're retreating, and move the units properly, not like how they are now, walking into each other, all messy.
The terrain is also very empty, barely any terrain tile variation, quite flat and don't spam volcanoes, lightning strikes, etc.
The combat scenes are very boring, no slow-motion or anything and random special effects aren't always cool looking.

Rating: 1/5

Check out some tutorials first.