Deathscream [WIP]

[Sabelion]

Hey I am working on a Hellscream undead, but it looks very low detailed. I whoud like it to looks more like he is a leader and not just regular soilder, because now he just got some plate. Coud anybody tell me a bit what to do to make him look more like a Leader or yeh..Hero or something.


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Updated 09/01/15
: I have now changed the armor of the upper body and lower body, but Im still unsure of the lower body (legs mainly) because for example it is not very well shadowed there (it looks like a stain) and I dont like the look of the pants overall.


Please give me ideas on how to change the.
Gloves, face , pants , and other things that you think shoud be changed.

Please do not comment the following things unless you have an idea on how to fix or make it better.
Gloves, kneepad or belt.

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

Add in more contrast to the face. The sockets in a skull aren't just pitch black, and skulls are a very light sepia/grayish tone, so make the eye sockets lighter and add shading in them, they are just not gaping holes, but cavities.

 

[~Void~]

The highlights are in all the wrong places...

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

TDR made this, and I think it will help you with your shading problem.

 

[Sabelion]

Thanks Elfsilver Lord and ~Void~
You got any idea how to make the armor look good? I think that plate I made looks terrifying. I want more details on it but doesnt realy know what details I shoud add.

 

[LiOneSS]

tdr made that for me D:

 

[Sabelion]

TDR made this, and I think it will help you with your shading problem.

Thats not even true I made the plate a lil bit weird and boring but still, it is the correct way to make Sabelo plate.

And by the way he doesnt show how to do faces from front. xD

 

[Hawkwing]

Can we see the unwrap?

 

[Sabelion]

Add in more contrast to the face. The sockets in a skull aren't just pitch black, and skulls are a very light sepia/grayish tone, so make the eye sockets lighter and add shading in them, they are just not gaping holes, but cavities.

I dont realy understand what you mean there, shall I make it lighter on the outside of the eye or something? so it goes from darkgray to black?

Hawkwing: Can we see the unwrap?

umm, ye sure just have to change him a little bit first. Havent changed him much from the other one I posted.


Guys maybe I shoud do hes overbody without armor/clothes, but how shoud I make a skeleton body?

 

[Kuhneghetz]

Also, the blending looks very inaccurate and needs to be more smoother.

 

[Shiroaisu]

I dont think this looks too much like an undead... i think it should be more skinny and i think it would be cool if you put the DK cape on him ^^ Just my opinion

 

[Direfury]

Yeah, just you can skin a moving cape onto a capeless model.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I dont think this looks too much like an undead... i think it should be more skinny and i think it would be cool if you put the DK cape on him ^^ Just my opinion

For your information, he's makin a custom texture/skin, not a custom model.

 

[Sabelion]

Hehehe, its true the thing Dan van Ohllus says. I cant make models because the programs doesnt work...hehe and if they did work my models whoud be realy...bad because my skinns are realy....bad, from what I've heard.
And how shoud I make him more skinny? xD
I have no idea how to make the arms smaller. And if I knew how to make them smaller, trust me...I whoud make them smaller and try to make them look like undead arms.

Ok I want him to have cool armor, anybody knows a cool armor that whoud suit this guy?

 

[XS-Archangel]

google a shape of the skull and look at that and later draw it instead of Grom's head

 

[Hawkwing]

Christ, necropost much?

Edit: It seems like Sabelion put you up to this, huh?

 

[Sabelion]

Christ, necropost much?

Edit: It seems like Sabelion put you up to this, huh?

Yeh..I told him to help me a bit with some comments.

And thank you XS-Archangel, I will google a skull.