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Dark Servant

Submitted by Shanndo
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is one of my first edited models and first one i put on The Hive, It may just be a simple remodel and recolour but, it's one of my first. :p im a noob that way lol.

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Undead Acolyte Servant Evil Undead
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Dark Servant (Model)

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13:48, 7th Jun 2008 General Frank: Too simple model edit. Just path changes. Rejected.
  1. 13:48, 7th Jun 2008
    General Frank:

    Too simple model edit. Just path changes.
    Rejected.
     
  2. Someguy19

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    No face? Also, try to detail the robe or something.
     
  3. cheese95

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    Ummmm its your first model so it's O.K. but it definately needs some work. If you maybe do some work it will look better. Maybe add a face or claws or something!! good luck!
     
  4. Hawkwing

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    All I can see is that you cut off his hands and made him look ugly. 0/5
     
  5. Karouk

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    Well, that certainly was positive...

    I think it would be better for the skin section, but yes, maybe some claws, oh wings would look uber awesome on him or horns! Wings and horns! :grin: Maybe add more design yes to the robes and more color + a face would be nice. Maybe just use the regular face and make the eyes be on fire. Just my idea(s).
     
  6. Coremarine

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    hmmm, it could use some more color. but other then that its good 4.5/5
     
  7. KingDedede

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    Looks like alot of CnPs, but then again, I dont recognize most CnPs. Though I think First Models are used as an excuse, I think its acceptable. I know im not a modeler, but if you ever get experience with particles, make shadowy flames emitting from the things called his hands. 6/10
     
  8. Black flesh

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    Sorry this model is ugly.:ugly:
     
  9. varsaigen

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    If you want to edit the model physically, I suggest the Milkshape 3D program. You'll have to get used to it at first, but after a day or two, you'll figure it out. The robe needs more of a design and looks like it is starparticle.blp
     
  10. Cenurick_Druidhorn

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    ooo, could deffinatly do with some work.
    Maybe leave his face complete black so as to occlude it completely from vision?
    And I hope the white spots don't show up in-game for if they do then that'll need to be fixed. Try completing his arms to, maybe give him some hands or, as others have suggested, claws and perhaps a weapon like a scythe or a sword?
     
  11. Anteep

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    If it's your first model, why did you upload it?
     
  12. The Red Wizard

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    why dont you just say it: this model suck :O .
    and yes dont upload your first model