Codex of the Keys RPG

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22:25, 16th Feb 2011
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Codex of the Keys RPG
Created by TimeDead ; Uploaded by: TimeDead

Review

Honestly buddy map is in really poor...
It can be better but you need to fix so many things, well lets start!

First thing that I didn't liked was missing map loading screen as well as map preview image. RPG means power, my friend, create epic loading screen with warriors you use ingame on it, it will better present your map.

Second thing is hero selection system, grrr so poor, no tooltips no nothing, I was only player and there was units owned by missing players, also I was able to see 30% of whole map

Finally I picked hero and saw blizzard created spells
No custom ones, you just for example added roar to paladin (Icon look poor, as well as special effect or ability name/description, there was no cooldown and manacost is set to 100, and that's big number for str hero with 200 mana total)

There was no any kind of system to display progress and so on, commands are poor and not recommend, use powerful multiboards my buddy, as well as dialog buttons or custom created interface systems, people just love to see those!

Now terrain...
Very poor, weak, empty...
Map miss large number of environment doodads as well as lightning and special effects (I don't speak about fire doodad)
There are no custom doodads or destructibles

And for the end interface, completely untouched.

Hmmm. Lets now talk about triggers:

• Leavers
  • Events
    • Map initialization
  • Conditions
    • (Player 2 (Blue) slot status) Equal to Has left the game
  • Actions
    • Game - Display to (All players) for 15.00 seconds the text: ((Name of (Triggering player)) + Has left the game!)
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units owned by Player 2 (Blue)) and do (Unit - Remove (Picked unit) from the game)

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• Leaver2
  • Events
    • Map initialization
  • Conditions
    • (Player 3 (Teal) slot status) Equal to Has left the game
  • Actions
    • Game - Display to (All players) for 15.00 seconds the text: ((Name of (Triggering player)) + Has left the game!)
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units owned by Player 3 (Teal)) and do (Unit - Remove (Picked unit) from the game)

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5 more triggers
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• Leavers 1
  • Events
    • Player - Player 1 (Red) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 2 (Blue) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 3 (Teal) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 4 (Purple) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 5 (Yellow) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 6 (Orange) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 7 (Green) leaves the game
    • Player - Player 8 (Pink) leaves the game
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Game - Display to (All players) for 15.00 seconds the text: ((Name of (Triggering player)) + Has left the game!)
    • Custom script: set_bj wantDestroyGroup = true
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units owned by (Triggering player)) and do (Unit - Remove (Picked unit) from the game)

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• Leavers 2
  • Events
    • Map initialization
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer i) from 1 to 10, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
          • If - Conditions
            • ((Player(i)) slot status) Equal to Is unused
          • Then - Actions
            • Custom script: set bj_wantDestroyGroup = true
            • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units owned by (Player(i))) and do (Unit - Remove (Picked unit) from the game)
          • Else - Actions

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• Hills1
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters HillsNospawnzone2 <gen>
  • Conditions
    • (Owner of (Entering unit)) Equal to Player 11 (Dark Green)
  • Actions
    • Unit - Kill (Entering unit)

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• Hills2
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters HillsNospawnZone1 <gen>
  • Conditions
    • (Owner of (Entering unit)) Equal to Player 11 (Dark Green)
  • Actions
    • Unit - Kill (Entering unit)

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few more
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• Hills1
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters HillsNospawnZone1 <gen>
    • Unit - A unit enters HillsNospawnzone2 <gen>
    • Unit - A unit enters Hillznospawnzone3 <gen>
    • Unit - A unit enters HillsNoSpawnzone4 <gen>
    • Unit - A unit enters HillNospawnzone5 <gen>
  • Conditions
    • (Owner of (Triggering unit)) Equal to Player 11 (Dark Green)
  • Actions
    • Unit - Kill (Triggering unit)

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• Flames
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters Entrence221 <gen>
  • Conditions
    • (Item-type of (Item carried by (Entering unit) of type Key of Flames)) Equal to Key of Flames
  • Actions
    • Destructible - Pick every destructible in trees1 <gen> and do (Destructible - Kill (Matching destructible))
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at (Random point in trees1 <gen>) using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at (Random point in trees1 <gen>) using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at (Random point in trees1 <gen>) using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at (Random point in trees1 <gen>) using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at (Random point in trees1 <gen>) using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Trigger - Turn off Flames <gen>

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• Flames
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters Entrence221 <gen>
  • Conditions
    • ((Triggering unit) has an item of type Key of Flames) Equal to True
  • Actions
    • Set TempPoint = (Random point in trees1 <gen>)
    • Destructible - Pick every destructible in trees1 <gen> and do (Destructible - Kill (Picked destructible))
    • Hero - Drop (Item carried by (Triggering unit) of type Key of Flames) from (Triggering unit)
    • Item - Remove (Last dropped item)
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at TempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • Wait 0.00 seconds
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at TempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • Wait 0.00 seconds
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at TempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • Wait 0.00 seconds
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at TempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • Wait 0.00 seconds
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect at TempPoint using Abilities\Spells\Orc\WarStomp\WarStompCaster.mdl
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_TempPoint)
    • Custom script: call DestroyTrigger(GetTriggeringTrigger())

Well I can go like this through whole map but try to do something yourself!

Please use Frozen Throne World Editor, you will be able to improve your map even more... Honestly maybe 1% of whole wc3 community play ROC.

Also you won't be able to clean leaks or do things like I did in ROC WE, why to make bad maps when we can create epic ones!

Also can you please stop with multi uploading, use update button instead!
Blade's of the North RPG v1.4 [Rejected]
Blade's of the North RPG v1.6 [Rejected (until updated)]
Those 2 maps are same like this one (well earlier versions).

Sorry buddy ↓
Map status: Rejected

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