Clash of Heroes

[Moderator]

23:07, 12th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
Broken Rules:
(Map) Credits
Comment

 

[light bolt30]

Do not multi upload, use the update button instead. A better description is needed, no one will a read a wall of text. Here's a list of BB Codes for you to use. Use colours, tables, add screenshots, etc to attract more people.

 

[Marcin013]

Fix the description !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Ironside]

Please don't make posts like that, it's considered spam.
If you only have something to say about the description, don't say it at all.

 

[PetrKubelka]

add screenshots and improve your description.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Click me!

1. I see you still use a lot of imported resources in your map, and it's simply not good. Use imported files when you actually need them, not when you like them.
2. You should definitively remove the "Made By Neca" box in the upper corner.
3. Since the first thing that players see when they join your map is the Hero Pick arena, you should make it more beautiful to our eyes. Spill over some terrain work and surround it with doodads. Arrange heroes in perfect distances. Surround with boundary to make them more appealing. Look at the image bellow, what I did in few minutes.

Images

4. In the previous version, I played a hero called Sorcery. Usage of her model is just wasting of map size, as it only adds wings to her. Instead, use the ordinary sorceress. It fits her concept more. I see that in this version as well, her class is Sorcery and her name is Sorcery. Name it with unique name, such as Annie, Elanya, Eruina, ... If you can't think of any good names, try with names from the real world, such as: Natasha, Maria, Ivanya, ... "Sorcery" isn't even a proper class name. Try with "Arcane Mistress" "Dalaran Mage" "Arcane Lady"... Her soundset should also be reverted to Sorceress instead of Jaina. Make her spells have right order.
1. Entangling Roots
2. Blink
3. Mana Shield
4. War Stomp
And instead of saying:
"Realise a huge amount of mana wich kills enemy unit!!!,,,,,,,,,"
try with the ordinary:
"After 5 seconds of casting time, the Arcane Lady will blast away all nearby enemy units, dealing 2000 damage to each. If units are not killed by this spell, they will get stunned for 3 seconds."
Also, it aint nice to make your mana cost bigger than your mana pool. I had to wait, like, 4 more levels after I got ultimate, just to have enough mana to cast it.
5. Some units have more HP than others. Some units have more Armor or Damage than others. Still, they should be same. Same for towers. Mind of fixing that?
6. Many models are overscaler, too tinted or way too small. Make sure that each of them is nearly the same size as others.

 

[Nenad94]

OMG that is so awsome you're very creative I anvie you !!!

 

[TheTinche]

this is among the best maps I've ever played
The terein is not so good and decoration but everything else is completley blast...Gameplay is verycool a specialy when you play with your friends on net......Ceep on going this is very good map..........

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

One of the things that are particularly nice when using Dalaran terrain is that the tiles appear to combine together in perfect geometric shapes, making you able to create various, how I like to call them, Rose terrains. Try it out, play around a bit, and if you want it, I can send you the terrain I worked in here.

 

[Nenad94]

hey It wouldn't be fare buy my side to stole your idea because you have a greate one.... You can see now the map I change the part which you have posted ;-)
Becide the decoratio what's map like ? Do you like, do I have some other things which I could work on, I'm opened for criticks ?

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

The idea is neat, but it needs stronger and sharper execution. One of the things that bothers me the most is that some heroes are way too big, and some are way too black colored. Some models are wrong. Using black colored Priest for the dark side is not good, use Acolyte instead.
Try to make your abilities conceited with the hero. I already said that for "Sorcery", the entangling roots can be changed to "Crystal Trap", and Blink can be "Teleportation" or "Time Warp". And make icons fit the theme, I see that she is purple-blue, use icons of that coloration.

Instead of uploading multiple maps, use the UPDATE button instead (

), and then notify us by posting a, well, post in here which contains what you have changed, added or removed.

Oh, and feel free to "steal" idea. It's made for you

 

[-Kobas-]

Errors errors all around!

• stafff
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Starfall
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 10, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at ((Position of (Casting unit)) offset by 400.00 towards ((Real((Integer A))) x 40.00) degrees) using Abilities\Spells\NightElf\Blink\BlinkTarget.mdl

Will eat your memory!

This should help Essentials Tutorial

 

[DeadBoss]

1. DESCRIPTION
- In this position the description is very bad, give us more information about the map changelog, screenshots, credits, hints etc.
VOTE: 0.5/5
2. TERRAIN
- Your terrain is very flat and simple i can't see mixed tilesets in your map, add more doodads.
VOTE 0.5/5
3. GAMEPLAY
- I can't see the differents beetwen other maps from this type of map.
VOTE 0/5
4. TRIGGERS
- There are some errors and leaks in your triggering.
VOTE: 0.5/5

POINTS: 1.5/25
VOTE: 1
Vote for REJECTION
~ MAP REPORTED

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

There is no need to report a map, it's used to violate the rules of this site. I can't see how a map with flat terrain and low amount of destructibles can violate some of main rules of the Hive. Anyways, I hope that the update is coming soon. Don't give up

 

[-Kobas-]

Moderation

Clash of Heroes
Created by Nenad Bogovac ; Uploaded by: Nenad94

Review

I already checked this before and posted comment about leaks.
Also post above mine explain all!

Btw you already uploaded this map once: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/dday-judgement-neca-185990/

Map status: Rejected
Please if you decide yo improve map just update this one and send message to us, we will unlock thread for you once again!

Broken Rules:
(Map) Credits
Thread Cleaned:
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Status: Rejected

 

[DeadBoss]

There is no need to report a map, it's used to violate the rules of this site. I can't see how a map with flat terrain and low amount of destructibles can violate some of main rules of the Hive. Anyways, I hope that the update is coming soon. Don't give up

I'm helping to -Kobas- and ap0calypse with the pending maps. Well there is report button you know, so i reported it.

 

[-Kobas-]

Well I used report button to report bad quality maps as well!
Still we would like to see some kind of review before you do so, otherwise you can report around 50% of pending maps in single day, so we wont have use from it

 

[Nenad94]

imam samo jedno da kazem za vas dvojicu nadjite zivot i prekinite druge da smarate .l.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Please use English language. Hive is a community based on English language. Oh, and why not, I translated the filthiness you said, just to have that in mind.

English Translation - Very Rude!

Parental Advisory

"I've got only one thing to say about you two, get a life and stop bothering others .l."

 

[DeadBoss]

Ignored him that is the easiest way.

 

[DeadBoss]

Why should i copy your cheap map? When i can make much better maps from you, and obviosly this map was made in 15 minutes. And you are acting like a little kid.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

what is the easiest way you son of bastard. . . Let me see you maps like you know how to make them..

YOU should respect someone, no matter of his/her sex, age and likes. Calling someone a "son of a bastard" is highly childish and rude to the edges of being banned in no time.

You just reject someones map so you can copy that map and publish it...

Sincerely, who would want to copy this shit of map to use it for himself? With this sentence, I pointed out to you that it's not nice when someone insults you, or worse, something you worked on. I also pointed that your map needs a lot of work, and you should go to "Map Development" first, to get useful feedback. As far as I know, there are very few maps that haven't went through that forum. Your map hasn't got a single thing that can makes us think that it needs approval. Sorry.

Like it's for 1.5 point of 25 I had already that pointing part and I had 16 point out of 25 but he didn't wanted to publish it and reject it

It is for zero or even negative values. I never seen a good map where someone typed out everything like a, excuse me, retarded squirrel. I never seen a good map where you cant get enough mana to cast ultimate on ANY level. I never seen a good map where you haven't credited user's models. I never seen a good map where there is not a single custom spells, leaks around every corner, and awful terrain I would cry for getting it out of my eyes. In case you haven't noticed, we all TRIED to help you, but you turned aggressive and attacked us repeatedly, even when there was not a good reason. Oh, and by the way, when someone gives a good mark for a low map, it's usually one type of person that begs people for rep.

FUCK YOU AND YOUR LIFE FIND A LIFE DON't BOTHER ANYONE!~!!! GO TO HELL BITCH

This shows how mature are you. So, okay, we won't bother you anymore. Mostly because I will report you, so that you can, hopefully, never enter Hive anymore. We don't need problematic, pathetic, immature, selfish, self-high-thinking users.

Note: Sorry for being offensive and, maybe, rude. Someone had to point him some things out. I am sorry that it had to be me.

 

[Nenad94]

Ok you do what you want I'm sorry only because I have respect for you Apheraz. . . I was mad because they dissmis all mine work in such a ignorate way. . .And they work together report me or not I said what I had he insolted me first whit those comments and I had to react

 

[-Kobas-]

Ok you do what you want I'm sorry only because I have respect for you Apheraz. . . I was mad because they dissmis all mine work in such a ignorate way. . .And they work together report me or not I said what I had he insolted me first whit those comments and I had to react

Well instead of reacting you should nicely ask what's problem, request further explanation why is map bad, and what you need to do to fix it!

I don't have time to give 2 many suggestions, play map over and over again, I just check if it works, it's quality and originality as well as presentation... If map broke rules I post warning, if map quality is bad I set map status to rejected until updated, if map quality is very bad + you have memory leaks, bad presentation and so on I reject it!

But I will always have some time for nicely users who want to improve their skills and ask for help!
I will show them how to fix errors, post links to tutorials and so on...

I hope that we can now forget about rude past and be friendly from now on!
For start I suggest you to open some blizzard created maps and check how they created terrain, triggers and so on! It's best way to start!

Thanks for time, have a nice day!