Chimera.blp

[Moderator]

16:15, 17th Dec 2008
Hawkwing: The bones don't really look like bones. Post this in the Texturing & Surfacing Forum and get some better feedback there.

EDIT:
You have 10 days to improve this skin. If I don't see any proper improvements afterwards, the skin will be rejected.
//Dan van Ohllus

EDIT:
Time's up, and I still see no changes.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Which model is this for?

Besides, i dont like it. It needs deffinition.

 

[Vasxazard]

It's for the Chimera model.

 

[knight26]

Well dude i see that you only made it bone-ly and all the same all over :S i mean you should ake it a bit darker somewhere.. hmm check this out please and make it like this
Undead Lindormr Dragon - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site

in other words make it uglier lol

 

[moyackx]

It's mediocre as a submission, I think this should be moved to a critic and discussion area so he can receive a proper feedback.

 

[Vasxazard]

Well dude i see that you only made it bone-ly and all the same all over :S i mean you should ake it a bit darker somewhere.. hmm check this out please and make it like this
Undead Lindormr Dragon - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site

in other words make it uglier lol

Alright, I'll edit it soon.

 

[StaberFire]

Decent for a first "official" skin. There are only a few key points I could make that would help this texture reach the.. erm.. "average" level. First of all, more shadows and highlights. When I first started texturing, I was afraid to make it too dark or too light. But trust me when I say this, there is practically no souch thing as "too dark" or "too light". It almost always looks better if you place them in the right spots. Secondly, the wings and legs look really messy on the wrap, you should probably give those another go and pay attention to how they fit onto the model.

I'd say this texture could look pretty good with more work. It's strong point is the head, that camer out pretty good. Keep working on it and it'll be a great texture in no time.

 

[SomeRandomDeleted Dr. Cabbage0]

According to me it looks like you did that skin under 30 minutes with a mom in the backround that was nagging in your ear about dinner..

Protip for ya: Make more details! Your dragon looks like humdrum zebra!

My favorite skins are the freehanded ones coz it requires more effort from the maker, try again, fall down the ladder, then climb up the ladder and try again, eventually you become a pro and make it right..

Maybe a pro on Zebra models?! XD

GL HF

 

[Devine]

... lol look at his weewee...
This could be done better?

 

[aaron]

well it must of been hard since i barely see these types of models but any way gj i like it even with the issues.

 

[Misha]

Ouch xD i can critique now ^^
first you're missing some defintition, the whole skin is a bit blurry lacks some highlights and shadows but in overal is neat. You defintivly need to fix the wings and make'em bat-is maybe? 3.58/5 good Make sure you read some tutorials on skining. good work so far

~Misha~

 

[StaberFire]

Lol, 3.58/5, you're so specific. =P

 

[cHeRoL]

You can change the colour a bit.

 

[Vasxazard]

Thanks for the advice. I'll certainly keep it all in mind when I fix up the skin.

 

[knight26]

Err also i wantet to point up something: the bone structure is a lot different from a bird, dragon, etc. i mean he should have like normal bones like Humerus,radius, ulna and femur, tibia, fibula... lol i'm not sure if u get what i mean

 

[Vasxazard]

Well, I had planned on making this more like a Chimera wearing bones as armour not an undead one, but I'll try my best to make it look like it has a functioning bone structure.

 

[oh_snap]

As Hawkwing said post this is the Texturing forum and get proper feedback on how to improve it; it does have potential and I think you should see this one through.

~Snap