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10:03, 3rd Jul 2009
zombie2279: Looks really simple and lacks visible details. The object is lost in the glow effect and the spell effect above, thus decreasing the overall quality. I recommend zooming in on the guy in the middle at least and trying to do the spell effect around it so the caster is visible aswell, and detailing the caster a bit further. The moon seems to be awkward and misshaped aswell, try to rework it afterwards.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Looks really simple and lacks visible details. The object is lost in the glow effect and the spell effect above, thus decreasing the overall quality. I recommend zooming in on the guy in the middle at least and trying to do the spell effect around it so the caster is visible aswell, and detailing the caster a bit further. The moon seems to be awkward and misshaped aswell, try to rework it afterwards.
Rejected until updated.