BTNTimesEnd

[Moderator]

20:42, 16th Apr 2009
Paladon:

Creativity: 2-3/5
Quality: 6/10
Status: Rejected until updated
Comment: Now improve the metallic look of the blade a bit and reduce the intensity of the background.
EDIT: No changes yet.

 

[a7xpwns3]

I have the version without squigglies too, if you want it.

 

[Paladon]

The sword looks okay, just work on a bit on the shadings on the handle. There are nearly none.
You're still getting better.

Try to get another background than the "squigglies", or overwork them more elaborative, they do not match with the sword's quality.
Next to that, the DISBTN could be improved by making the black border blending with the icon.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Gotcha. I'll work on it tonight

 

[OnkelManfred]

well looks okay but needs a lot of work

 

[redragex]

alright but more shading

 

[Paladon]

Please work on the shadings of the handle and look again how a real DISBTN looks like.
I recommend that you improve the background by reducing it's intensity near to the borders.