BTNSpear

[Moderator]

10:54, 24th Dec 2009
Pyramidhe@d: There are bits that need shading, the whit thing that dangles from the spear, it is unclear what it is. Feather i think it is meant to be but it is not shown properly

enjoy: Blade looks to round and it lacks background.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Work in Progress:

View attachment Arrow1.psd View attachment Arrow2.psd

Fullsize:

 

[S.W.I.N.E]

basic

 

[KelThuzad]

Okay, so... where do we start...

Well, I don't want to sound nerdish and to be strickt, just want to point out on flaws:
1) If it's a fire arrow, then some part of the metal should be "on fire", and to make better effect the trails of the fire should go further.
2) Metal looks nice, but abit more shadings would make it even cooler.
3) If it's not a fire, then decrease the background opcaity and make it glow.

Overall, it does look nice, but not really useable, so 4/5.

 

[Tortured Souls]

bad glow and too fat handle(wood part)

 

[havard1993]

My opinion is that the fire stick out too much, so it looks kinda weird

 

[X-OMG-X]

Thanks for the feedback everybody. Will make the woodhandle less fat, work on the shading and fix a new BG.

 

[NFWar]

See at your album my comment, and if this is fire around spear, use diferent solors and smudge with circles right/left. But first give some color of fire and it variations.

 

[Narandza]

bad glow and too fat handle(wood part)

Sorry but... bad... 2.5/5

 

[X-OMG-X]

I've turned my arrow into a spear. What do you think? Is it better than the original arrow?

 

[The Panda]

Yes that seems ok but the orange glow was weird. I suggest some sort of effect going around the arrow or maybe a glow coming off of it.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Yes that seems ok but the orange glow was weird. I suggest some sort of effect going around the arrow or maybe a glow coming off of it.

Allready tried to make a simple glow. Failed. Im failing big time when it comes to glows.

 

[Narandza]

Its really great now it deserves +rep and 3/5

 

[cookies4you]

looks more like a chicken strip on a stick. the stick is fine but the blade stinks, sorry if i offended someone.

 

[X-OMG-X]

looks more like a chicken strip on a stick. the stick is fine but the blade stinks, sorry if i offended someone.

Cant really see the chicken
Anyways thanks for the very useful feedback

[EDIT]

I did what Pyra said. I hope i've made some improvements.

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

oh you meant that little thing was teeth...hmmm i think it is too small to show properly and rather look like a white blob
need more shading on the wood

 

[X-OMG-X]

New version. Updated the fullsize version in first post aswell.

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

more shading on the wood. i want the thing to look 3D

 

[darkdeathknight]

The blade is a cone. You should change that