BTNSoulofSagittarius4

[Moderator]

17:59, 14th Jul 2009
zombie2279: I'd like to see some contrast and better detailed outlines please. Some highlight effects on the object would also do well.

9:34, 18th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

 

[Palaslayer]

well. what shall i say.

first off, the glow is somehow weird, and as on your other icon i know that you can improve a lot if you just want. keep working!

 

[krisserz]

The left side is too empty.

 

[Somnium]

Yeah, what am gonna do is to zoom in on the arrow tip and change the color of the glow because i think that's what's making it strange.

BIG PICTURE

Okie, I updatezor. Am still not satisfied but i don't really know how to improve. I mean i know what needs improving but how to do it :L Ohwell one day my noobness will be gone

-Somnium

 

[krisserz]

Hmm, I think the arrow is too big.

 

[Somnium]

Oh thanks kirsserz, i think that's what i though was strange in it I'll make it smaller a bit later because atm i just can't be assed xD

-Somnium

 

[Pottum]

I agree krisserz. The arrow is too big :x

 

[Palaslayer]

what are the purp stripes there? is that the arrow? tell me your concept so that i can understand your idea and suggest improvements.

 

[Potluck]

i think the pink/purple effect is too solid/lumpy and mebe it should cover the whole area around the arrow shaft. else its a good idea and the arrow itself looks good

 

[Pottum]

what are the purp stripes there? is that the arrow? tell me your concept so that i can understand your idea and suggest improvements.

No it isn't...
I think the purp/pink stripes are soul - like. maybe this arrow hit the soul xd.
or something like that... aww... I can't explain that good what I mean xsad:

 

[Somnium]

Major Change

I hope you all like it now, it looks more like what it's meant to look like. Still pretty damn sucky but ohwell, all i can do :L

 

[Deolrin]

Add some orange tones in that red line thing, and light-blue\teal tones to the blue one. Also make those runes-things bigger, as they are unnoticeable as it is now.

 

[Palaslayer]

not bad.

 

[Somnium]

Am not satisfied with the rune thingys. I don't think they look good, so i made the hardly noticable. I would love to make the arrow somehow ghostly but i dont know how Okie i shall add some orangenesh :L

Edit: Made the arrow gold and somhow ghostly i hope. Made thie things kinda etheral dragons. Am not doing any updates to it anymore, or well atleast not today
-Somnium

 

[Panda]

Looks good but you need pick the right colors, because these colors mess up the definition of what your trying to make here.

 

[Trillium]

love this icon

 

[krisserz]

It looks pretty good now. Just add PASS ;]