BTNShardsOfTheRealm

[Moderator]

23:28, 6th Oct 2012
I3lackDeath: Interesting concept and colour combination. Not your best work, but definitely approvable.

 

[I3lackDeath]

What exactly is the concept of this one? It looks a little bit random to me at the moment.

Since you called it "shards", I assume you want some sort of glass to represent gates/windows to different dimensions/realms. If that's the case, I would already have some ideas on how you can get this "broken glass" feeling/look.

Depending on what you want to show, we can help you achieve a clearer message and better result of your idea.

 

[JollyD]

It is broken Orb of Realm

 

[I3lackDeath]

I see. Well, to clearly identify this as an actual orb (even if it's broken), you will have to change the shading, as it currently looks like an erythrocyte.

Erythrocyte

So basically, the middle looks flat, while the outside is elevated.

Basically, keep the cracks the way they are, simply create an additional layer where you apply the correct shading. By highlighting the correct edges of the cracks (depending on where the light source is), you will get the look you are looking for.

If you feel like I am being too unspecific or unclear, feel free to ask, I can also provide examples, if you need/want them.

 

[Chaosy]

I like the look but it seems that you got to remake it a bit, 3/5 for now but I will rate it later if you change anything

 

[JollyD]

I see. Well, to clearly identify this as an actual orb (even if it's broken), you will have to change the shading, as it currently looks like an erythrocyte.

Erythrocyte

So basically, the middle looks flat, while the outside is elevated.

Basically, keep the cracks the way they are, simply create an additional layer where you apply the correct shading. By highlighting the correct edges of the cracks (depending on where the light source is), you will get the look you are looking for.

If you feel like I am being too unspecific or unclear, feel free to ask, I can also provide examples, if you need/want them.

Thanks ill work on shadings than

 

[JollyD]

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[Cakedog345]

Sorry, but i find it very ambiguous!

 

[InfernalTater]

I think it's pretty cool, 4/5.

 

[Rainbow_Dash]

Pretty nice