BTNSFWAncientRituals

[Moderator]

23:05, 26th May 2010
enjoy: It's too blurry and the lines are too thick imo. try to make them thinner and make it more smooth and clear, instead of rough.

 

[mnib]

the hands look pretty nice but i dont know what should i say about that fire or whatever it is;s

 

[asailant]

I looks too noisy, what's up with that? Looks like a scanned 80's comic book.

 

[SexYFrostWyrM]

I looks too noisy, what's up with that? Looks like a scanned 80's comic book.

Lol where did you find this weird comparison ?
This is a fire in the middle, what's wrong with this ? Too much glow ?

 

[Hemske]

Too compact/solid in my opinion. The fire is what i refer too. Make it more "alive" and more variation in it.
As well as the background, looks too compact/rough. The hands are great though.
Also reduce the thickness of the black lines.
This will be a great icon with some work!

 

[asailant]

Lol where did you find this weird comparison ?
This is a fire in the middle, what's wrong with this ? Too much glow ?

I have tried scanning comics with my old printer - 'amazing results'.