BTNRockSlam

[Moderator]

16:34, 29th Aug 2012
Apheraz Lucent: Very blurry and undefined, also a little off in the anatomical way. You could benefit from more visible stone texture, and shading/highlighting of each pebble individualy. The icon lacks motion, slight wind traces and/or actuall burst of dust could fix it (particle effects, in short). The earth and the stone textures look oversmudged as well. Take a look at the 'Slam' icon from Warcraft for useful reference.

 

[Matarael]

This actually looks decent for a first (second?) timer. Perhaps you could increase some brightness to the wrist and the "swooshing" background just to add contrast?

I look forward to seeing your future icons as I'm sure they'll only improve with more practice. I'd also suggest you post a bigger picture as an attachment so that you can get better input from the maestros here ha ha ha...

 

[KaplanHorus]

big image ?

 

[SpasMaster]

Malphite. xD

Acceptable icon. Kinda blurry..

3/5

 

[dratiny]

Malphite. xD

Malphite's red

I'd also suggest you post a bigger picture as an attachment so that you can get better input from the maestros here ha ha ha...

I will

 

[TheRanmar]

Well, it lacks definition. Lots of it. Also, you seem to miss the point of the big picture. Big picture doesn't mean you simply scale the icon up, it's a picture of the icon before it's scaled to 64x64. It's needed to proof that the icon is done by you, freehand etc.

 

[dratiny]

Well... the thing is, since it's my first icon I started it in 64x64... >_<
But I can give you the Gimp file with the different layers if you doubt I did it by myself

 

[Coaster_Man]

Very blurry, so much so that I thought it was smoke.

 

[Matarael]

What I mean with "big image" is the actual file you worked on, the PSD or TGA. Usually they're large right? Post that too so we can all give suggestions on that not just the small screencapture

User http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/i3lackdeath/ used to do that with his icons, and he received tons of input... before he was... killed... in his prime... RIP*.


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*he's not really dead he just stopped posting resources.

 

[dratiny]

Ahah ok I'll do later for the other icons I'll upload.
(btw it's a .xcf format but I con convert easily, uh >_<)

 

[Vengeancekael]

It's very blurry and that hand doesn't look very natural, is that thing on the ride side supposed to be a finger? ;P