BTNPoisonousPlant

[Panda]

Please define this, its very confusing I cant tell what is happening or see a "plant" in this, all the green makes it look confusing. Maybe zoom in on the plant and inlarge it making the details pop more and make it more presentable.

 

[KILLCIDE]

I agree with The Panda. If it weren't for the name of the file, I'd have no idea what it is.

 

[San]

It's hard to shade properly when it comes to thin object like these, you kind of just placed those poisonous gasses almost everywhere(with the same color still) and we don't know where to focus on.
It probably needs another kind of effect or none at all, just try uploading a version without poisonous gasses.

 

[PrinceYaser]

It's hard to shade properly when it comes to thin object like these, you kind of just placed those poisonous gasses almost everywhere(with the same color still) and we don't know where to focus on.
It probably needs another kind of effect or none at all, just try uploading a version without poisonous gasses.

Hm.. that's more convincing. Like this?

 

[Panda]

Sorry but I'd disagree. It's pretty definable in my opinion, I'm satisfied with it.

Well im really not sure what to say because I honestly can not figure out what it is, this is a plant.

 

[San]

Yup, very much better now, just try cleaning up the pixels on the edge around the sticks when you have the time.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Well im really not sure what to say because I honestly can not figure out what it is, this is a plant.

Man that's some leaves, not a plant. Mine has a stem and foliages that every plant has.

Yup, very much better now, just try cleaning up the pixels on the edge around the sticks when you have the time.

Alright, I'll upload this now. Will fix some things tomorrow.

 

[San]

Looking good.

 

[LISBOAH]

I like it. Good job!