Btnpilot

[Moderator]

15:13, 27th Jan 2016
Apheraz Lucent: Matching icon approved. A bit mushy and blobby tho.

 

[Hantoo]

Big Picture

 

[Deleted member 238226]

i think the highlight is too strong. and the beard needs more definition

 

[Hantoo]

i think the highlight is too strong. and the beard needs more definition

Okie, Tinkering

 

[Hantoo]

Does this makes it better?

 

[WhiteFang]

You should work on the mustach,it could use some defining

 

[Roland]

The mustache seems to be decent, As WhiteFang said it needs some defining of the details on the mustache, Although the gray subtle background seems to be blurry, I recommend you to sharpen the icon a tinsy-winsy bit. Anyway, your Icon is great, well-detailed (For some parts only) and also a great outcome for your fitting model. Excellent job, Hayate.

 

[Hantoo]

The mustache seems to be decent, As WhiteFang said it needs some defining of the details on the mustache, Although the gray subtle background seems to be blurry, I recommend you to sharpen the icon a tinsy-winsy bit. Anyway, your Icon is great, well-detailed (For some parts only) and also a great outcome for your fitting model. Excellent job, Hayate.

Thanks, but i actually not sure how to define, any reference to show what you mean? Like, more strokes? More shadow? Or.....

 

[Roland]

It needs more lighting in the edges of the icon (Dwarf)

 

[Chaosy]

Seems blurry but hell, I really like the icon somehow. 4/5